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Old 10-29-2010, 12:55 PM   #886
WT Sharpe
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Originally Posted by kennyc View Post
Judgment


With stone silence
around us
we wait.


Kenny A. Chaffin – 10/29/2010
Very very nice.

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Originally Posted by kennyc View Post
Thanks Geoff.. appreciate that ..very unsure about this one....

In fact....a possible re-write:


Judgment

Surrounded
by stone cold silence
we wait.


Kenny A. Chaffin – 10/29/2010
I like the first form much better. "Stone cold" reminds me of the wrassler (deliberate spelling).
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