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Old 09-21-2009, 04:44 PM   #1
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Ok I am taking my life in my hands and publishing my second short story. I am sure it has many errors but I hope you can see past my errors to the narrative they contain .

You'll find it via this thread https://www.mobileread.com/forums/showthread.php?t=57163

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Old 09-21-2009, 04:44 PM   #2
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Ok I am taking my life in my hands and publishing my second short story. I am sure it has many errors but I hope you can see past my errors to the narrative they contain .

You'll find it via this thread https://www.mobileread.com/forums/showthread.php?t=57163

Yours with a slightly embarrassed grin

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Old 09-21-2009, 04:52 PM   #4
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Old 09-21-2009, 06:53 PM   #5
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Hooray for Pev!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Old 09-21-2009, 09:13 PM   #7
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Old 09-23-2009, 12:07 AM   #8
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Old 09-24-2009, 09:21 AM   #9
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Old 09-25-2009, 12:46 AM   #10
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Oh! I almost lost this thread. Great story. Very believable - except the pope! Hard to believe he could take on such a burden :-)

Uhmmm - where do I find your first story?

Thanks for a good read.
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Old 09-25-2009, 01:12 AM   #11
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Oh! I almost lost this thread. Great story. Very believable - except the pope! Hard to believe he could take on such a burden :-)

Uhmmm - where do I find your first story?

Thanks for a good read.
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