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Old 04-14-2016, 05:44 AM   #1
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** Freebies Time **
New to the e-book fraternity my 1st book goes live for Amazon promotion allowing it’s free download today 14/04/16 & 15/04/16 for Kindle App/Device.
Do download & RATE THE BOOK WITH A REVIEW on Amazon. Thanks. Links updated below:
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Old 04-14-2016, 09:54 AM   #2
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Thank you for the the offer.

The illustrations are very cute!

You might want to consider having someone edit the text.

"He loved the chirping birds did .."

Did you have some artistic purpose in mind for making up your own punctuation marks?
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The illustrations are fabulous.
The story on the other hand made me go ?.
The extra punctuation threw me off.
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Thank you for the the offer.

The illustrations are very cute!

You might want to consider having someone edit the text.

"He loved the chirping birds did .."

Did you have some artistic purpose in mind for making up your own punctuation marks?


Thanks a ton for your feedback and regret the delay in responding. I did create the additional punctuations to make it sound a bit dramatic .... however guess did not go as i thought it would. I'll surely re-work to put those right and submit a revised version shortly. Thanks again.
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Old 04-26-2016, 10:45 AM   #5
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The illustrations are fabulous.
The story on the other hand made me go ?.
The extra punctuation threw me off.


Thanks for sharing your review and regret the delay in replying. I'll surely re-work the over done punctuations and resubmit the book. Will positively work on your feeback on the story while preparing my next book. Thanks again.
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Old 04-28-2016, 08:35 AM   #6
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Refreshed version now uploaded - The birds and the water puddle
Hi ... basis the feedback received on my children's book i've uploaded a slightly tweaked and a cleaned up version (additional punctuations removed). This is now available for free download on Kindle Unlimited and purchase on amazon. Thank you once again for your feedbacks, and look forward for more reviews.
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Hi ... basis the feedback received on my children's book i've uploaded a slightly tweaked and a cleaned up version (additional punctuations removed). This is now available for free download on Kindle Unlimited and purchase on amazon. Thank you once again for your feedbacks, and look forward for more reviews.

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Just to let you know, if you don't: This is considered a weekly promotional posting.

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Just to let you know, if you don't: This is considered a weekly promotional posting.

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Sure Sir, will be mindful of the same going forward. Thank you for bringing it up. Went through the promotion guidelines, and shall follow the requirements as listed. Have a good day. Thanks again.
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Sure Sir, will be mindful of the same going forward. Thank you for bringing it up. Went through the promotion guidelines, and shall follow the requirements as listed. Have a good day. Thanks again.
If you have any questions, please PM me.

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