A Horse Named Liquor: Mystery & Suspense

literaryeditor · 03-11-2014, 02:56 PM

Excerpt from A Horse Named Liquor

The brows of reason furrowed! What was his plot? What was behind the dark door in his mind? Theft? Rape? Torture? Murder? A little of everything.

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Bilbo1967 · 03-11-2014, 03:02 PM

Sorry. I think that the bizarre punctuation marks this one as a no for me.

literaryeditor · 03-11-2014, 03:24 PM

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Originally Posted by Bilbo1967

Sorry. I think that the bizarre punctuation marks this one as a no for me.

I read a lot of classic literary fiction.

So. . . .

You are what you read.

(I wouldn't describe the punctuation as bizarre, though. Shakespearean maybe. Bizarre no.)

Bilbo1967 · 03-11-2014, 03:35 PM

I have actually read quite a lot of Shakespeare and classic literature over the years. Do you know what they all have in common? They didn't just randomly sprinkle colons and semi-colons across their work.

I guess that's why they're successful and you're reduced to trying to make your failings look like the problem of ill educated readers.

literaryeditor · 03-11-2014, 04:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bilbo1967

I have actually read quite a lot of Shakespeare and classic literature over the years. Do you know what they all have in common? They didn't just randomly sprinkle colons and semi-colons across their work.

I guess that's why they're successful and you're reduced to trying to make your failings look like the problem of ill educated readers.

I was just telling you what my writing was rooted in. That's all. I'm sorry you took it the wrong way.

03-11-2014, 02:56 PM	#1
literaryeditor Member Posts: 18 Karma: 10674 Join Date: Nov 2011 Device: KINDLE	A Horse Named Liquor: Mystery & Suspense Excerpt from A Horse Named Liquor The brows of reason furrowed! What was his plot? What was behind the dark door in his mind? Theft? Rape? Torture? Murder? A little of everything. Visit Amazon to read more! http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00H2UFIEE Last edited by literaryeditor; 12-15-2014 at 01:55 PM.

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03-11-2014, 03:02 PM	#2
Bilbo1967 Not scared! Posts: 13,424 Karma: 81011643 Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Midlands, UK Device: Kindle Paperwhite 10, Huawei M5 10	Sorry. I think that the bizarre punctuation marks this one as a no for me.

03-11-2014, 03:35 PM	#4
Bilbo1967 Not scared! Posts: 13,424 Karma: 81011643 Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Midlands, UK Device: Kindle Paperwhite 10, Huawei M5 10	I have actually read quite a lot of Shakespeare and classic literature over the years. Do you know what they all have in common? They didn't just randomly sprinkle colons and semi-colons across their work. I guess that's why they're successful and you're reduced to trying to make your failings look like the problem of ill educated readers.