A poem I wrote

Dee Q · 01-29-2013, 12:07 PM

Hi guys, I think sometimes it's best to express ourselves using poems. This is a poem named "Lost" that I wrote. I'm not a native English speaker and English is not even my second language, not to mention that fact that I don't know beans about the English verse, so please forgive me if there are any foolish use of the language and inappropriateness. It's rather short and I hope it's understandable and tolerable enough.

Lost

Oh how I miss the good old days
When people were nice and tender-hearted
When I had trees to climbs and birds to raise
And green fields where I would rest on with my buddies, feeling contented

But now I feel lost and deeply wretched
Craving for love and companionship and warmth
For out there people themselves are struggling in their tiring orbit
Or perhaps with this disgrace I must come to terms

I would turn to angels then
‘Cause by hearsay they’re pure and benevolent
Yet where they are and how to find them are beyond my ken
I’m crushed, impoverished, and disheartened…

badgoodDeb · 01-31-2013, 02:52 PM

Hey, we've got a thread of people writing poetry. You ought to join them! Let's see if I can find that thread ..... here it is!

Dee Q · 01-31-2013, 09:26 PM

Thank you badgoodDeb! I didn't know then.

I'll try there.

01-29-2013, 12:07 PM	#1
Dee Q Born Yesterday Posts: 134 Karma: 2744112 Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Vietnam Device: Kobo Libra 2 & Kindle Scribe & Kindle 2022	A poem I wrote Hi guys, I think sometimes it's best to express ourselves using poems. This is a poem named "Lost" that I wrote. I'm not a native English speaker and English is not even my second language, not to mention that fact that I don't know beans about the English verse, so please forgive me if there are any foolish use of the language and inappropriateness. It's rather short and I hope it's understandable and tolerable enough. Lost Oh how I miss the good old days When people were nice and tender-hearted When I had trees to climbs and birds to raise And green fields where I would rest on with my buddies, feeling contented But now I feel lost and deeply wretched Craving for love and companionship and warmth For out there people themselves are struggling in their tiring orbit Or perhaps with this disgrace I must come to terms I would turn to angels then ‘Cause by hearsay they’re pure and benevolent Yet where they are and how to find them are beyond my ken I’m crushed, impoverished, and disheartened…

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01-31-2013, 02:52 PM	#2
badgoodDeb Grand Sorcerer Posts: 8,574 Karma: 64462893 Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Harrisburg outskirts Device: Palms, K1-4s, iPads, iPhones, KV, KO1	Hey, we've got a thread of people writing poetry. You ought to join them! Let's see if I can find that thread ..... here it is!

01-31-2013, 09:26 PM	#3
Dee Q Born Yesterday Posts: 134 Karma: 2744112 Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Vietnam Device: Kobo Libra 2 & Kindle Scribe & Kindle 2022	Thank you badgoodDeb! I didn't know then. I'll try there.

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