The Blood Annals

Ted Moro · 08-09-2011, 11:51 PM

Hi I'm Ted and I just published my first story on kindle and just trying to get the word out. The story is a sword and socery vampire story based in alternate realty. I am also working on next story about a wizard king.
http://www.amazon.com/Ted-Moro/e/B00..._athr_dp_pel_1

elcreative · 08-09-2011, 11:52 PM

Post in the author self-promotion area... you'll get better attention and cause less irritation

[EDIT by Moderators: as correctly suggested, thread relocated to Author Self-Promotion from previous location. Thanks, Marc, Moderator]

Giggleton · 08-10-2011, 12:01 AM

That's a neat image on your page, I would be more interested in your wizard story then your vampire story though.

HarryT · 08-10-2011, 06:59 AM

Ted,

If, as you say on your biography page on Amazon, you want your writing career to "take off", you're going to have to dramatically improve your grammar, spelling, and punctuation. No offence intended, but reading that sample I wouldn't touch your story with the proverbial barge-pole. Errors such as these are the "kiss of death" for any story, no matter how good it is.

08-09-2011, 11:51 PM	#1
Ted Moro Junior Member Posts: 1 Karma: 10 Join Date: Aug 2011 Device: none	The Blood Annals Hi I'm Ted and I just published my first story on kindle and just trying to get the word out. The story is a sword and socery vampire story based in alternate realty. I am also working on next story about a wizard king. http://www.amazon.com/Ted-Moro/e/B00..._athr_dp_pel_1 Last edited by Ted Moro; 08-09-2011 at 11:53 PM.

08-09-2011, 11:52 PM	#2
elcreative Wizard Posts: 2,888 Karma: 5875940 Join Date: Dec 2007 Device: PRS505, 600, 350, 650, Nexus 7, Note III, iPad 4 etc	Post in the author self-promotion area... you'll get better attention and cause less irritation [EDIT by Moderators: as correctly suggested, thread relocated to Author Self-Promotion from previous location. Thanks, Marc, Moderator] Last edited by montsnmags; 08-10-2011 at 04:46 AM.

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08-10-2011, 12:01 AM	#3
Giggleton Banned Posts: 1,687 Karma: 4368191 Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: Oregon Device: Kindle3	That's a neat image on your page, I would be more interested in your wizard story then your vampire story though.

08-10-2011, 06:59 AM	#4
HarryT eBook Enthusiast Posts: 85,544 Karma: 93383099 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: UK Device: Kindle Oasis 2, iPad Pro 10.5", iPhone 6	Ted, If, as you say on your biography page on Amazon, you want your writing career to "take off", you're going to have to dramatically improve your grammar, spelling, and punctuation. No offence intended, but reading that sample I wouldn't touch your story with the proverbial barge-pole. Errors such as these are the "kiss of death" for any story, no matter how good it is.