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Old 11-16-2009, 09:57 PM   #271
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By the way, Wyldkit, congratulations, you're my hero.
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And congrats on the 3,000 words!
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Old 11-16-2009, 10:29 PM   #272
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Got to 44,853 today. and finished the story. Now I gotta go back and put in a back story of the Mob Boss and the Monkey God (the little bastich!) And beef up the romance elements between Armistice and Constance.

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Old 11-17-2009, 02:20 AM   #273
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Woohoo!! Beefed up Romance, I love it!
I am still behind. made it to 24247 today. I'll be cheering and watching for you to cross the finish line tomorrow, pshrynk. That gibbon sounds like fun!

Wyld, how's Star Trek treating you??

Everybody else, I am glad to be in your company, especially the people who have been quiet and suddenly show up with wordcounts and stories! Such fun (except for the day I just couldn't write . . . )!

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Old 11-17-2009, 10:34 PM   #274
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Old 11-17-2009, 11:01 PM   #275
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Wyld, how's Star Trek treating you??
Much, much slower! I don't know if it's because I've lost momentum or if I'm just not very good at fan fiction, but I'm struggling! Guess I need to go watch some Voyager episodes for research/motivation.
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Old 11-18-2009, 12:38 AM   #276
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Real life got in the way again. I'm at around 28k though, still ahead of the curve. Not by much though. Hopefully tomorrow I'll do some catch up. Looking to nail down at least 10k from around 2p - 10p. Even if I have to hole myself into a closet or something.

My character just had a massive transformation in the span of two paragraphs. I hope it translates well in the scheme of things. I may have to explain this a little more in a rewrite.

Back in the beginning he waxed poetic about killing a helpless deer.

And now he garrotes a blind old man. It was the easiest way I could think of to get him in the tower. I'm going to have to explain in a backstory or dialog how the Sun is like mystical and is believed to have magic healing powers (LOL)

Which would explain why he'd have to dress up as a blind old man to get in to go pray for sight.

Man, my world is twisted.
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Old 11-19-2009, 11:19 PM   #277
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Chugged along again tonight. Only got 1400 done before I started to get sleepy. It's still early though. Maybe I can squeeze another 1400 out. Word count stands at 31,769. Not bad, but not great either.

I just posted the whole chapter in the Beyond the Black thread. It's a little bit spoilerish for those wondering where the story takes place. But if any of you guys want to check it out and give me some advice on how to make it flow better - please let me know =)
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Old 11-20-2009, 03:01 AM   #278
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I have no advice for you, Jaxx -- I'm trying to get mine to flow at all!

Wyld, you are amazing! It sounded like your first story was well thought out before you began writing, and the new one isn't. Could it be that simple??

BIG GRATS and Woohoo!! for pshrynk. I see you got past 50,000! Way to go!!
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Old 11-20-2009, 08:44 AM   #279
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Yeah, i made it. I had to add a whole chapter and four or five sections to get there. Now, I'm spell checking to get ready for re-writes. Chapter 2 is posted in the Armistice Walker and the Golden Orb thread.
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Old 11-20-2009, 11:09 AM   #280
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Wyld, you are amazing! It sounded like your first story was well thought out before you began writing, and the new one isn't. Could it be that simple??
That's certainly part of it, but I also let my husband talk me into writing a story he's interested in, and I found I just don't care about the plot. I think I'm going to scrap it and maybe start something new, or just write character sketches instead of another novel.


Congrats Pshrynk!!

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Old 11-20-2009, 03:48 PM   #281
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There is nothing worse than realizing you just don't care about the story you're writing. It's happened to me a couple of times.
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Old 11-20-2009, 06:11 PM   #282
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I'm still going strong, mainly because I refuse to fail.
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Old 11-22-2009, 01:27 PM   #283
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Old 11-23-2009, 02:49 PM   #284
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After a couple of days off I just crested 40000! My goal for today is 43000.
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Old 11-23-2009, 07:29 PM   #285
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I'm right behind you Doug. I hope to break 40k tonight. I'm at 37651 right now and am taking a quick break for dinner with friends. Then it's right back to the grind.
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