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			"air conditioning" ? what is this mythical contraption ? i have no idea what you mean (but yes, yesterday it was well over 30. today it was cooler, which makes sense, since i just went grocery shopping and bought a lot of summer food. it never fails). i might stay inside anyway. or go out to café. tomorrow. (it's past midnight now).
		 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
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			when you say "choices" you only mean what order you're going to publish them, right ?
		 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
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			I like the cover, too.  Growing up, we had green army men like that (not quite that florescent, though) and all our victories were small ones ...
		 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
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		 Yes, and the cafe also appears in Suggested Oddities, if only in a brief mention    I'm a massive Joni Mitchell fan, here's few other Joni inspired titles I've done:A Victim of Typewriters The Canyon Ladies(this is the begining of a novella about four women who live in a small town in California, each with a very strange story to tell) A Round For the Freaks and the Soldiers On the Face of the Conquered Moon (story and collection title) and too many more... i write a lot, I just hate editing  
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			Oh yes, I should have been more clear.  I go on a kind of gut reaction, something inside that says "Now!" very loudly and then I'll just upload.  The Song of Insects is missing something at the end, and as yet I don't know what it is, it'll come to me thought.  I'm waiting for Halloween for the Mortgage of Ghosts, because, it's a Halloween novel, and The Murder of Shadows is an inverted detective story, so I'll wait till the Luka stuff is out of the way on that one.
		 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
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			This just isn't right.  I clicked on the download link and it just downloaded to my computer.  Could you please add some geographic restrictions or something.  Maybe only every third Canadian should be able to download the ebook. 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
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			you're right barcey, it's far too easy. i got it too without having to jump through a single hoop ! seems unnatural to me.
		 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
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 ![]() I would also like to see that and also I just had an idea for a story, and....damn it...I'll never start editing at his rate  
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