Harv and Vera's Adventures in Panama - Page 16

zelda_pinwheel · 11-21-2008, 02:38 PM

oh !!!! CLASSIC !!! brilliant ending !!!! really, hats off to you. we should create a new literary prize, so we could give it to you. how does "pshrynk, recipient of the Llama* for outstanding fiction work" sound ?

*or something

pshrynk · 02-23-2009, 11:02 AM

At the urging of my wife, I am re-working this to be a wee bit more coherent for the general public. Mostly removing the "voices in my head" aspects and inserting narrative to tell the back story. Not sur how long it will take, but will post as an e-book when it's done.

GeoffC · 02-23-2009, 11:04 AM

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Originally Posted by pshrynk

At the urging of my wife, I am re-working this to be a wee bit more coherent for the general public. Mostly removing the "voices in my head" aspects and inserting narrative to tell the back story. Not sur how long it will take, but will post as an e-book when it's done.

Please leave the "Voices in the Head" aspect in - it'll make it more believable ...

zelda_pinwheel · 02-23-2009, 12:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pshrynk

At the urging of my wife, I am re-working this to be a wee bit more coherent for the general public. Mostly removing the "voices in my head" aspects and inserting narrative to tell the back story. Not sur how long it will take, but will post as an e-book when it's done.

ho ho, a revised version ! can't wait to see it. i hope it's not going to be taking valuable time away from the mexican adventure though.

pshrynk · 02-23-2009, 12:39 PM

There's a Mexican Adventure?

zelda_pinwheel · 02-23-2009, 12:41 PM

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Originally Posted by pshrynk

There's a Mexican Adventure?

don't make me come over there.

GeoffC · 02-23-2009, 12:45 PM

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Originally Posted by pshrynk

There's a Mexican Adventure?

either that or there is a lot of eating of chillies....

nekokami · 02-23-2009, 03:14 PM

Cool! Looking forward to the ebook version!

pshrynk · 02-24-2009, 10:21 AM

Vivaldi! Are you over here! TWEET TWEET! Where could he have gotten off to? Always when I need to get to work early!

badgoodDeb · 02-24-2009, 02:55 PM

So, what made your frog turn gold, pshrynkie? And, why a frog to begin with? (Not that there's any reason why NOT a frog; but if there's a story behind it, I wanna know!)

pshrynk · 02-24-2009, 02:58 PM

All the dogs are disappearing around here, so I've moved on to frogs. He's an hallucination, so hence the gold.

badgoodDeb · 02-24-2009, 03:09 PM

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Originally Posted by pshrynk

All the dogs are disappearing around here, so I've moved on to frogs. He's an hallucination, so hence the gold.

If I kiss him, does he turn into a really RICH prince, then?

pshrynk · 02-24-2009, 03:17 PM

Only if I win the PowerBall tomorrow nite.

badgoodDeb · 02-24-2009, 03:23 PM

And I'll bet SUmkII (or was that III ? sorry) won't let me anywhere NEAR you, to kiss you. Darn.

pshrynk · 02-24-2009, 03:29 PM

You'd be very correct on that one.

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11-21-2008, 02:38 PM	#226
zelda_pinwheel zeldinha zippy zeldissima Posts: 27,827 Karma: 921169 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Paris, France Device: eb1150 & is that a nook in her pocket, or she just happy to see you?	oh !!!! CLASSIC !!! brilliant ending !!!! really, hats off to you. we should create a new literary prize, so we could give it to you. how does "pshrynk, recipient of the Llama* for outstanding fiction work" sound ? *or something

02-23-2009, 11:02 AM	#227
pshrynk Beepbeep n beebeep, yeah! Posts: 11,726 Karma: 8255450 Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: La Crosse, Wisconsin, aka America's IceBox Device: iThingie, KmkII, I miss Zelda!	At the urging of my wife, I am re-working this to be a wee bit more coherent for the general public. Mostly removing the "voices in my head" aspects and inserting narrative to tell the back story. Not sur how long it will take, but will post as an e-book when it's done.

02-23-2009, 12:39 PM	#230
pshrynk Beepbeep n beebeep, yeah! Posts: 11,726 Karma: 8255450 Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: La Crosse, Wisconsin, aka America's IceBox Device: iThingie, KmkII, I miss Zelda!	There's a Mexican Adventure?

02-23-2009, 03:14 PM	#233
nekokami fruminous edugeek Posts: 6,745 Karma: 551260 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Northeast US Device: iPad, eBw 1150	Cool! Looking forward to the ebook version!

02-24-2009, 10:21 AM	#234
pshrynk Beepbeep n beebeep, yeah! Posts: 11,726 Karma: 8255450 Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: La Crosse, Wisconsin, aka America's IceBox Device: iThingie, KmkII, I miss Zelda!	Vivaldi! Are you over here! TWEET TWEET! Where could he have gotten off to? Always when I need to get to work early!

02-24-2009, 02:55 PM	#235
badgoodDeb Grand Sorcerer Posts: 8,574 Karma: 64462893 Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Harrisburg outskirts Device: Palms, K1-4s, iPads, iPhones, KV, KO1	So, what made your frog turn gold, pshrynkie? And, why a frog to begin with? (Not that there's any reason why NOT a frog; but if there's a story behind it, I wanna know!)

02-24-2009, 02:58 PM	#236
pshrynk Beepbeep n beebeep, yeah! Posts: 11,726 Karma: 8255450 Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: La Crosse, Wisconsin, aka America's IceBox Device: iThingie, KmkII, I miss Zelda!	All the dogs are disappearing around here, so I've moved on to frogs. He's an hallucination, so hence the gold.

02-24-2009, 03:17 PM	#238
pshrynk Beepbeep n beebeep, yeah! Posts: 11,726 Karma: 8255450 Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: La Crosse, Wisconsin, aka America's IceBox Device: iThingie, KmkII, I miss Zelda!	Only if I win the PowerBall tomorrow nite.

02-24-2009, 03:23 PM	#239
badgoodDeb Grand Sorcerer Posts: 8,574 Karma: 64462893 Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Harrisburg outskirts Device: Palms, K1-4s, iPads, iPhones, KV, KO1	And I'll bet SUmkII (or was that III ? sorry) won't let me anywhere NEAR you, to kiss you. Darn.

02-24-2009, 03:29 PM	#240
pshrynk Beepbeep n beebeep, yeah! Posts: 11,726 Karma: 8255450 Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: La Crosse, Wisconsin, aka America's IceBox Device: iThingie, KmkII, I miss Zelda!	You'd be very correct on that one.