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Old 06-14-2017, 05:35 PM   #16
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Hey Steven,
You might want to avoid the sounds and just be straight forward with the commands because I don't think all horses are trained exactly the same with tongue clicks and stuff.
This, I guess. And ditto to all the posts above on the sound effects, it's cheesy (I still really like Recluce though). Imagine you're writing about driving a car: Adding all the commands in is like describing every time someone stepped on the clutch or the brakes or turned the steering wheel, it's kind of overkill.

"He urged his horse forward and into a brisk trot."
"She reined in her horse and came to a stop at the hitching post."

Horsey enough for me, and I expect for most people.
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Old 06-15-2017, 05:22 AM   #17
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I absolutely refuse to tell the joke about the horse and the bar.
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Old 06-15-2017, 05:24 AM   #18
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*groan* Wow, even without the sound effects his writing leaves a lot to be desired. Oy.
He's actually a very good author, despite the sound effects . If you've not read the "Recluse" series, I'd recommend it to you.
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In case anyone doesn't understand what I mean by the "sound effects" in Modessit's books:







... and so on on virtually every page .
You torture us with all these effects, but still recommend the books. He must be a really good writer if one can overlook the sound effects.
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You torture us with all these effects, but still recommend the books. He must be a really good writer if one can overlook the sound effects.
He is.
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Old 06-15-2017, 11:48 AM   #21
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He's actually a very good author, despite the sound effects . If you've not read the "Recluse" series, I'd recommend it to you.

But I would not limit yourself to just the Recluse series (which is the biggest)
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Old 06-15-2017, 01:17 PM   #22
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Don't forget to describe when the horse has to do his/her business.
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Don't forget to describe when the horse has to do his/her business.
If there's one thing I hate, it's standing in line at a bank with a horse in front of me!
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Old 06-18-2017, 11:41 PM   #24
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Dr. Drib, you are a hoot.
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Dr. Drib, you are a hoot.
You think he's a hoot here, you should read his writing.
Very strange man.
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