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Old 10-17-2016, 09:44 PM   #16
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No Zombies

The cover is Warm. Sun, Fun and Beach ?

Suspense needs to be cold, or bloody or contain some symbol of mayhem
So if I throw a couple of zombies in there?
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Old 10-17-2016, 10:22 PM   #17
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I always want your opinion!
In that case, that cover doesn't do a thing for me.
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Old 10-18-2016, 09:31 AM   #18
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So if I throw a couple of zombies in there?

You called?
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Old 10-18-2016, 05:27 PM   #19
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In that case, that cover doesn't do a thing for me.
Thanks Cin. Bailing on that cover.
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Old 10-18-2016, 05:28 PM   #20
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Old 12-14-2016, 01:07 PM   #21
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Gregg,
I just saw your book. That is a good cover.
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Old 12-15-2016, 09:12 AM   #22
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Agreed. Both with the original feedback and with Cinisajoy's comment on the final look. I like the blues and the suspicious twirl. Congratulations, Gregg.
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Old 12-16-2016, 02:39 AM   #23
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Yep. An excellent result. After such a long struggle with it, you should be pleased.
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Old 12-20-2016, 07:57 PM   #24
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I just saw your book. That is a good cover.
Thanks Cin.
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Old 12-20-2016, 07:57 PM   #25
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Agreed. Both with the original feedback and with Cinisajoy's comment on the final look. I like the blues and the suspicious twirl. Congratulations, Gregg.
Thanks Andrew
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Old 12-20-2016, 07:58 PM   #26
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Old 12-22-2016, 06:19 AM   #27
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That's a wonderfully atmospheric cover, using a nice blend of color, typography, and layout.

You need to put both covers side-by-side on a post in this thread.

Let everyone see how much more effective that new cover is compared to the one in post #1.

You're wise enough not to spam us with promotional BS.
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Old 12-23-2016, 08:37 PM   #28
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You need to put both covers side-by-side on a post in this thread.

Let everyone see how much more effective that new cover is compared to the one in post #1. [...]
And maybe show the progress on this from 6 months ago. What a difference!
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Old 12-24-2016, 04:46 PM   #29
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Here is the progression from left to right
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Old 12-24-2016, 05:31 PM   #30
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A huge...and wonderful change.

Congratulations!
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