Cover feedback please? - Page 7

capidamonte · 11-14-2015, 04:20 PM

Knocked this out for some reason, no idea why.

Hitch · 11-14-2015, 04:37 PM

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Originally Posted by capidamonte

Knocked this out for some reason, no idea why.

Cap!!

How the hell are you?

Like that cover, too. Of course, it kind of implies that the whacky protag knows how to dance, which we're led to believe isn't the case. But still...I like it.

Hitch

pdurrant · 11-14-2015, 04:50 PM

I love the image. Not so sure about the typography, but the subtle Union Jack hint that the action is in London is great.

capidamonte · 11-14-2015, 05:39 PM

Hey Hitch, hope you're well! I read most of the posts in this thread, but for some reason I missed that she didn't know how to dance.

pdurrant: fonts are easy to change, just a first pass. Thanks for the kind words!

The idea popped into my head, so I made it. Maybe Gregg will have an opinion.

Perhaps I should get back into making covers.

Hitch · 11-14-2015, 08:08 PM

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Originally Posted by capidamonte

Hey Hitch, hope you're well! I read most of the posts in this thread, but for some reason I missed that she didn't know how to dance.

It's entirely possible that it's in the other thread, about the inquiry letter (for an agent).

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Perhaps I should get back into making covers.

Let me know if you do.

Hitch

Gregg Bell · 11-21-2015, 11:47 PM

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Originally Posted by capidamonte

Knocked this out for some reason, no idea why.

That is a very very VERY clever cover. I like it a lot. Thing is I'm trying to get an agent now so the cover is not an issue. (It could be if I don't get the agent though.)

And yeah, you should get back into making covers.

btse1 · 12-09-2015, 05:22 PM

Rather late to the party and rarely post, but with respect to the cover as originally shown here, perhaps I could address the font issue. I was once roundly criticized for mixing fonts in a sample cover of my own making (the critic was a knowledgeable professional). I did a down-and-dirty survey of book covers and quickly saw that his unity of fonts rule was correct for the most part. Yes, I know there are exceptions, many of them....

Hitch · 12-09-2015, 05:49 PM

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Originally Posted by btse1

Rather late to the party and rarely post, but with respect to the cover as originally shown here, perhaps I could address the font issue. I was once roundly criticized for mixing fonts in a sample cover of my own making (the critic was a knowledgeable professional). I did a down-and-dirty survey of book covers and quickly saw that his unity of fonts rule was correct for the most part. Yes, I know there are exceptions, many of them....

Was this quite a while ago? Like, years?

I ask because it's been fairly standard, the last 5+ years, no matter whether we're talking Indy pubbed or trade-pubbed, for two different fonts to sit on a cover page. Top-selling authors (Ta-Nehisi Coates, Lee Child), tend to have one-font covers, but many others (David Baldacci, Patterson, etc.) have two. I agree, however, that of late, I've noticed a swing back toward single-font covers, as it was about 20 years back. (Probably a reaction to all the godawful covers out there--following the KISS principle!).

What's dreadful is when someone goes wonky on the fonts. Then you get 4; one for the title, one for a logline; one for the byline, and one for something else. THAT will make your eyes bleed.

And let's not forget everyone's two faves: Papyrus and Comic Sans.

Hitch

cromag · 12-09-2015, 07:18 PM

I could see one font for the title and a second font for the author's name (say, a serif and a non-serif mix) but more than that strikes me as being a bit busy. Although, I'm sure there are exceptions.

Hitch · 12-09-2015, 11:37 PM

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Originally Posted by cromag

I could see one font for the title and a second font for the author's name (say, a serif and a non-serif mix) but more than that strikes me as being a bit busy. Although, I'm sure there are exceptions.

Very few. I've seen a mere handful of covers that have more than 2 fonts that aren't dead awful.

Hitch

btse1 · 12-10-2015, 10:37 AM

Hitch: FWIW, it was about 18 months ago.

capidamonte · 12-18-2015, 09:01 PM

Thanks for the compliment, Gregg! Luck with the agent. If you don't succeed there, be glad to work with you.

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capidamonte Not who you think I am... Posts: 374 Karma: 30283 Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Honolulu Device: PocketBook 360 -- Ivory	Hey Hitch, hope you're well! I read most of the posts in this thread, but for some reason I missed that she didn't know how to dance. pdurrant: fonts are easy to change, just a first pass. Thanks for the kind words! The idea popped into my head, so I made it. Maybe Gregg will have an opinion. Perhaps I should get back into making covers.

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btse1 Junior Member Posts: 7 Karma: 10 Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: The Great Pacific Northwest Device: kindle fire	Rather late to the party and rarely post, but with respect to the cover as originally shown here, perhaps I could address the font issue. I was once roundly criticized for mixing fonts in a sample cover of my own making (the critic was a knowledgeable professional). I did a down-and-dirty survey of book covers and quickly saw that his unity of fonts rule was correct for the most part. Yes, I know there are exceptions, many of them....

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cromag Surfin the alpha waves ~~ Posts: 26,046 Karma: 459735575 Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: New Jersey Device: Jetbook Lite & Mini, Nook STR, Kobo, Hanvon N516, Kindle 2, Androids	I could see one font for the title and a second font for the author's name (say, a serif and a non-serif mix) but more than that strikes me as being a bit busy. Although, I'm sure there are exceptions.

12-10-2015, 10:37 AM	#101
btse1 Junior Member Posts: 7 Karma: 10 Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: The Great Pacific Northwest Device: kindle fire	Hitch: FWIW, it was about 18 months ago.

12-18-2015, 09:01 PM	#102
capidamonte Not who you think I am... Posts: 374 Karma: 30283 Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Honolulu Device: PocketBook 360 -- Ivory	Thanks for the compliment, Gregg! Luck with the agent. If you don't succeed there, be glad to work with you.