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Old 05-18-2008, 04:14 AM   #1
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A short story--comments, thoughts, criticisms?


A few months ago I wrote a short story--sort of in the style of Douglas Adams, just a fun, goofy, off the wall science fiction story. I wasn't sure what to do with it, but thanks to smashwords, I could make it available online

If any one would be interested in checking it out, I would absolutely love a critique! It's pretty short, and shouldn't take long to read!

Here's the link:

I'd really like constructive criticism--but please be gentle: it's just something I did for fun!

Thanks a lot

edit: You don't have to pay for it or anything! I just picked "set your own price" on the off chance that anyone would like to contribute to the rapidly shrinking financial resources of a college student

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