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Old 05-19-2010, 04:38 PM   #613
beppe
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Originally Posted by GeoffC View Post
You doubt the second one is mine ?

Cheeky .....

Of course it is .....


Now ? why do you ask ?
No, I did not doubt or assume. I just waited to look at it to be sure that it was by you. Please forgive me if in any way I upset you.That was not my intention at all.

It is beautiful, the trick is so well hidden in the craft. The two poems stand up by themselves and merge continuously verse by verse. Becoming one. the main symbol, the disclosed gem. It will take some careful reading and playing with it for me to drink it with great pleasure, and recognize the flavors and how they play on each other.

That could well be a druidic marriage song. I will keep it for my LD, because it is warm and pure.
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