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Old 05-19-2010, 02:41 PM   #610
beppe
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Originally Posted by GeoffC View Post
I shall provide a title in due course, or at least provide my take on the meaning.

I particularly like the numerous 'takes' that have been suggested , It shows me that I am doing what I aim to, and that is invoke the readers' emotions (rightly or wrongly) ...

Also shows, I think, the power that a title has on a poem ....
Ah Ah we are being de-structuralists now. Title, I'll give you a title right away. Sir Geoff. How do you like that.

Is the second one yours? Just answer yes or no, you sneaky Briton. Please

My comment to follow.

Since the mighty Dreams came into the game I feel much more confident. Ah.
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