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Originally Posted by HarryT
The punctuation needs some work. Comments in-line:
Correct punctuation is important - it defines the way the entire piece "reads".
I have no problem with the present tense for the "dream sequence" by the way; I think it works well.
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Thanks for this Harry, I know that I need a lot of work on punctuation as well as spelling (which isn't as evident here)
I am just about to start a course though
