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Old 05-02-2009, 01:55 AM   #25
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Originally Posted by Moe The Cat View Post
A nice story, Moe. I enjoyed it. I didn't know cats and birds spoke the same language!

Can I point out a small typo? Near the middle of the story is the sentence "Zelda sat, eyeing the cat for weakness, but could find none." Shouldn't that be Zelda eyeing the bird?
Oops Now corrected
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