Thread: Sights a Bird (SHORT STORY)
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Old 05-02-2009, 01:07 AM   #24
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A nice story, Moe. I enjoyed it. I didn't know cats and birds spoke the same language!

Can I point out a small typo? Near the middle of the story is the sentence "Zelda sat, eyeing the cat for weakness, but could find none." Shouldn't that be Zelda eyeing the bird?
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