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lilac_jive · 03-30-2009, 02:46 PM

I'm reading Persuader and I'm having a hard time with it. All the sentences are really short and there's too much description, like "The driveway came up to the house. The steps were cracked marble. The door was oak." It's killing me.

03-30-2009, 02:46 PM	#1726
lilac_jive Grand Sorcerer Posts: 5,870 Karma: 27376 Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Pennsylvania Device: PRS-505	I'm reading Persuader and I'm having a hard time with it. All the sentences are really short and there's too much description, like "The driveway came up to the house. The steps were cracked marble. The door was oak." It's killing me.