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Originally Posted by avantman42
I suspect more white space would make it easier to read. I suggest adding some blank lines. Ideally, group related things, and have blank lines between the groups. Personally, I wouldn't use caps and bold, just one or the other. For example:
Title: Double Whammy (A Davis Way Crime Caper Book 1).
Genre: Fiction.
Author: Gretchen Archer.
Narrator: Dina Pearlman.
Price: $4.98: $2.99 (ebook (marked down)) + $1.99 (Whispersync audio)).
Price of audio, by itself, at Audible: $19.60.
Ebook rating/reviews: 4.5 stars/292 reviews (Amazon).
Audio rating/ratings: 4.0/94 ratings.
Pages/audio length: 298/9 hours and 53 minutes.
Audible URL: http://www.audible.com/pd/Mysteries-...6749794&sr=1-1
Amazon URL (can get the whole Whispersync deal here): http://www.amazon.com/Double-Whammy-...5534XHCRX7B11R
Comments: I don't know anything about the book other than the above. However, it gives me an opportunity to try out a tweaked template. Unfortunately, Mobileread apparently does not allow two blank spaces together; they would be nice to have after the semicolons to make things less crowded and, therefore, more aesthetically pleasing. If someone knows of a workaround, please let me know. |
Yeah, the lower case for both looks pretty good--opens things up nicely. I don't know about the blank lines from grouping things together, though.
Thanks.