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Originally Posted by scrapking
I read some of the volume on Smashwords you linked to in your last post. Volume 9 in the Society On Da Run, it seems? At any rate, I must admit that the idea of post apocalyptic SF poetry is intriquing. In the prose at the beginning of the book it was occasionally unclear what was dialogue and what was narration, but it was holding my attention. The editing was a bit uneven at times (no typos, but occasional clunky sentences and repeated words). Still, an interesting approach and I will read more.
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Really? I didn't think the poetry was doing justice, so I (foolishly) took out the poetry and replaced it with prose. I really didn't think it was that good. Thank you for the encouraging words! I am going to re-edit the book and put the poetry back in.