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Duodora · 05-18-2008, 04:14 AM

Hello,

A few months ago I wrote a short story--sort of in the style of Douglas Adams, just a fun, goofy, off the wall science fiction story. I wasn't sure what to do with it, but thanks to smashwords, I could make it available online

If any one would be interested in checking it out, I would absolutely love a critique! It's pretty short, and shouldn't take long to read!

Here's the link:
http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/76

I'd really like constructive criticism--but please be gentle: it's just something I did for fun!

Thanks a lot
Connie

edit: You don't have to pay for it or anything! I just picked "set your own price" on the off chance that anyone would like to contribute to the rapidly shrinking financial resources of a college student

05-18-2008, 04:14 AM	#1
Duodora Enthusiast Posts: 47 Karma: 10 Join Date: May 2008 Location: MD and SD, US Device: Cybook!	A short story--comments, thoughts, criticisms? Hello, A few months ago I wrote a short story--sort of in the style of Douglas Adams, just a fun, goofy, off the wall science fiction story. I wasn't sure what to do with it, but thanks to smashwords, I could make it available online If any one would be interested in checking it out, I would absolutely love a critique! It's pretty short, and shouldn't take long to read! Here's the link: http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/76 I'd really like constructive criticism--but please be gentle: it's just something I did for fun! Thanks a lot Connie edit: You don't have to pay for it or anything! I just picked "set your own price" on the off chance that anyone would like to contribute to the rapidly shrinking financial resources of a college student Last edited by Duodora; 05-18-2008 at 04:17 AM.