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Old 10-13-2007, 03:09 PM   #1
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Poe, Edgar Allan: The Raven. v1.0 13 October 2007

I did not like the previous version of this poem, so I did my own.

Note: I reduced the font size to 8 so the lines are not split on my Reader. It looks good.
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Old 10-14-2007, 12:57 AM   #2
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I found a few things that do need correcting.

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Is there--_is_ there balm in Gilead?--tell me--tell me, I implore!"
Take that line.. _is_ should be is. _ are used to denote italics. Also -- should be — (em dash). Other then that I think it's fine.
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