Science Fiction Lake, Steven: The Oort Perimeter. v2. 11 Apr 2010 - Page 3

Steven Lake · 08-06-2010, 03:35 PM

Thanks for the advice. I'm already working with some wonderful people to help me move things up a level. You should start seeing the improvements I've been making when the next part of the series comes around. I've even gone back and cleaned up my first three stories and applied the things I've learned so far, and under their tutelage. I'm hoping that by book 7 I'll really have it up to prime time quality, which is what I desperately want.

Steven Lake · 08-14-2010, 02:34 PM

FYI to those who are interested. One year ago on August 14th, the original version of my first novel, "The Oort Perimeter" was officially released for publication. It's been a wild 12 months, but a fun one as well.

etienne66 · 10-06-2010, 08:32 PM

I just finished this. I thought it was pretty good, I just wished I had realized that you had updated it. I was getting kind of frustrated with all of the missing section breaks. I see in the revision that you put them in. I had only found a few mistakes like using "offers" instead of "officers" in one spot.

Now if you'll just work out the problems with Smaswords and EZread so I can by the sequel.

Etienne66

Steven Lake · 10-06-2010, 09:42 PM

Well, for the time being you can buy the ebook directly from me. Just toss me a few bucks in my tip jar and I'll send it your way.

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08-06-2010, 03:35 PM	#31
Steven Lake Sci-Fi Author Posts: 1,157 Karma: 14743509 Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Michigan Device: PC (Calibre)	Thanks for the advice. I'm already working with some wonderful people to help me move things up a level. You should start seeing the improvements I've been making when the next part of the series comes around. I've even gone back and cleaned up my first three stories and applied the things I've learned so far, and under their tutelage. I'm hoping that by book 7 I'll really have it up to prime time quality, which is what I desperately want.

08-14-2010, 02:34 PM	#32
Steven Lake Sci-Fi Author Posts: 1,157 Karma: 14743509 Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Michigan Device: PC (Calibre)	FYI to those who are interested. One year ago on August 14th, the original version of my first novel, "The Oort Perimeter" was officially released for publication. It's been a wild 12 months, but a fun one as well.

10-06-2010, 08:32 PM	#33
etienne66 Groupie Posts: 185 Karma: 9832 Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Texas, US Device: Kindle 2, PRS-600 Black, PRS-650 Red, Adam w/ Pixel Qi(pre-ordered)	I just finished this. I thought it was pretty good, I just wished I had realized that you had updated it. I was getting kind of frustrated with all of the missing section breaks. I see in the revision that you put them in. I had only found a few mistakes like using "offers" instead of "officers" in one spot. Now if you'll just work out the problems with Smaswords and EZread so I can by the sequel. Etienne66

10-06-2010, 09:42 PM	#34
Steven Lake Sci-Fi Author Posts: 1,157 Karma: 14743509 Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Michigan Device: PC (Calibre)	Well, for the time being you can buy the ebook directly from me. Just toss me a few bucks in my tip jar and I'll send it your way.