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Old 09-07-2009, 08:51 AM   #61
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I finished reading it over the weekend. Wow! I have never been shy about saying that I'm a Steve Jordan fan, but this was just a quantum leap (forgive the inevitable pun) from your other stuff! You have hit a stride with this book that I hope we see in your work for a good long time!

At first I was a little leary of trying to follow the multi-character approach, but I was able to visulaize each and every one clearly as soon as they were identified in their sub-plots.

And the science was believeable and understandable. The info-dumps which are the bane of existance for all hard SF writers were handled as well as I have ever seen. The long narratives were contextual and informative without being didactic.

Fortunately, being a humor writer, I don't have to come up with an explanation of techno-gizmos other than, "They're bugger all to get started on a cold morning..." And the open plot devices were not disappointing, but fit in nicely and show that there is a longer story arc that will be continued.

So, thank you thank you, thank you, Steve, and what are you doing reading this, get back to work on the sequel already!
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Old 09-07-2009, 01:01 PM   #62
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This unworthy one prostrates himself before you, O appreciative (not to mention perceptive) readers! May Allah grant you all healthy, intelligent children and/or significant others that adore and respect you and keep you well in your old age!
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Old 09-07-2009, 05:11 PM   #63
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Well, have you written the sequel yet?
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Old 09-07-2009, 06:51 PM   #64
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...and may Allah grant you patience...
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Old 09-07-2009, 09:14 PM   #65
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Steve, I bought Verdant Skies today along with The Lens. That means I now own every one of the books you've got on your site, except for Chasing the Light. Unfortunately, I've not read as many as I have purchased, so I need to get busy here.
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Old 09-07-2009, 09:52 PM   #66
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Ah, The Lens was a very good read! I'm anxiously awaiting the 3rd book in the Kestral series.

I bought Steve's hard sci-fi bundle (he calls it 'hard bun' hmmm) and I'm listening to As the Mirror Cracks right now.

I've read and enjoyed Onus - that's calling out for a sequel, too.

Back to work, Steve

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Old 09-07-2009, 10:30 PM   #67
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Steve, I just had a totally free, do nothing, no neighbors around, lazy day and was able to finish Verdant Skies. I absolutely loved it! Since I live in the USA and have been to Yellowstone it was especially interesting for me.

I now understand what your Speculative tag means on your website..
"Extrapolations based on real and theoretical science."

pshrynk expressed most of my thoughts about your book so I will shamelessly quote a little of what I especially agree with...

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At first I was a little leary of trying to follow the multi-character approach, but I was able to visulaize each and every one clearly as soon as they were identified in their sub-plots.
The many characters caused me to pay a little more attention to my reading than I normally do with recreational reading.

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And the science was believeable and understandable.
I felt that the story and time was totally believable and I could envision the situations happening as they did. (Gotta love politicians and big money players.. they never change.)

I have Berserker and Lens and I'm making plans for my next lazy day...

**OK, enough time reading our stuff... write!!***
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Old 09-08-2009, 03:27 AM   #68
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Yeah I agree but have you written the sequel yet.
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Old 09-08-2009, 02:42 PM   #69
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Okay, I'll get right to work on that.

Let's see: "It was a dark and stormy nebula."

Mmmm... may need work. Give me a few million minutes...

(Wonder if'n I kin tide them over with another DOS episode?...)
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Great Book! I can't wait to find out what the future holds for Verdant.
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Old 11-03-2010, 01:43 PM   #71
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5-Star review of Verdant Skies

Our own GraceKrispy has delivered a 5-star review of Verdant Skies, which can be read in its entirety on Amazon.com and Goodreads, as well as other booksellers.

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I think the riveting storyline and the fascinating physics push this story into a 5 star read. Strongly recommended.
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Old 11-03-2010, 02:35 PM   #72
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The link in the parent message is no longer valid!?!
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Old 11-03-2010, 03:25 PM   #73
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If you mean the link in the OP, it is now fixed.
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Steven, Thanks!

Yes, it works now but it appears the book is no longer free.
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Steven, Thanks!

Yes, it works now but it appears the book is no longer free.
I don't believe it was ever "free"... it was considered a deal, and DRM-free.
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