08-15-2008, 07:40 AM | #1 |
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Twain, Mark: The War Prayer v2 15 August 2008
This is the second version, with headings centered with more space below, some hyphens changed to mdashes, and a typo fixed.
I'd appreciate more comments about its style and readability. Regards, Alex Attachment moved to the original thread here. |
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Hi Alex,
Could I ask you please, to "follow the rules" and replace (or add) the new version in the first message of the original thread? Just go to the original message, click the "Edit" button, then "Advanced", then "Manage Attachments" to upload a new attachment or delete the original one. If you start a separate thread for a new version we end up with multiple entries for it in our e-book index, which is undesirable. Thanks very much, |
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08-18-2008, 02:13 AM | #3 |
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Sorry, Harry. I had read the rules but forgot that part.
I'll try to do better in future. Regards, Alex |
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I was actually asking you to move the attachment of this thread, Alex . Never mind - I've done it for you now.
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