Dead Pigeons by Sam Luka - Page 4

Moejoe · 08-17-2009, 02:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ravenlife

Richie

Glad you enjoyed it Richie

There will be more to come....

for reading.

dreams · 08-17-2009, 02:47 PM

Just a quick pop in to say that I LOVED the below sentence from your story

..

"Where he should have been and where my kick should have connected were just two wishes that would never come true."

Now, back to the story...

**Moejoe, I hope you didn't mind that I quoted a piece from your story.**

Moejoe · 08-17-2009, 03:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dreams

Just a quick pop in to say that I LOVED the below sentence from your story

..

"Where he should have been and where my kick should have connected were just two wishes that would never come true."

Now, back to the story...

**Moejoe, I hope you didn't mind that I quoted a piece from your story.**

Quote away

I just hope you enjoy the rest, and not just that one sentence

columbus · 08-17-2009, 03:05 PM

A quick comment to say I loved 'Dead Pigeons' Very 'retro' and I now have an image of an Asian woman in a red Kimono stuck in my mind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dam you Moejoe how do you see my fetishes??

Moejoe · 08-17-2009, 03:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by columbus

A quick comment to say I loved 'Dead Pigeons' Very 'retro' and I now have an image of an Asian woman in a red Kimono stuck in my mind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dam you Moejoe how do you see my fetishes??

I hope the same woman doesn't

Spoiler:

in your fetish?

columbus · 08-17-2009, 03:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Moejoe

I hope the same woman doesn't

Spoiler:

in your fetish?

Errrr! No!

DixieGal · 08-17-2009, 03:40 PM

I just downloaded it, and it went straight to the top of my list. I'm a fan of the author, you know.

Verencat · 08-17-2009, 11:08 PM

Slightly pissed that I missed the new stories coming out this week end - I like being one of the first to read your prose!

Well, duly downloaded, I'll attack tomorrow (maybe on my new Sony?

)

Thanks Moejoe!

PieOPah · 08-18-2009, 05:59 AM

Just downloaded this ready to add to my queue. I hope you don't mind me pointing out though a (possible) small error in the first sentence -

Quote:

That morning I was killing time waiting for a sign painter. I was Oh for six on tossing cards into a my hat when I noticed Steinbeck.

Looking forward to reading

Moejoe · 08-18-2009, 11:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PieOPah

Just downloaded this ready to add to my queue. I hope you don't mind me pointing out though a (possible) small error in the first sentence -

Looking forward to reading

That's odd, it's not in my original posting or my document.

Will fix as soon as I can get into Feedbooks. It's running slow as molasses

PieOPah · 08-18-2009, 11:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Moejoe

That's odd, it's not in my original posting or my document.

Will fix as soon as I can get into Feedbooks. It's running slow as molasses

It's also on your original post so you may want to edit that as well

Moejoe · 08-18-2009, 11:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PieOPah

It's also on your original post so you may want to edit that as well

Oops

Just updated the one on Feedbooks, but I'll leave the stray word up here for posterity

zelda_pinwheel · 08-18-2009, 11:56 AM

i started reading it last night and it's brilliant ! i love it so far.

i can't wait for the others as well.

Moejoe · 08-18-2009, 12:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zelda_pinwheel

i started reading it last night and it's brilliant ! i love it so far.

i can't wait for the others as well.

I stayed up last night / this morning editing Beneath a Bloodshot Moon, and it was like going back to meet an old friend. I wrote these four detective novels in 2006 and then left them 'in storage', thinking I'd never see them again, and here I am 3 years later ressurrecting them

Here's a preliminary cover for Bloodshot Moon (still needs a crapload of work)

zelda_pinwheel · 08-18-2009, 12:09 PM

i love it as is.

but i'm sure i'll love the final version as well.

08-17-2009, 02:47 PM	#47
dreams It's about the umbrella Posts: 25,112 Karma: 56250158 Join Date: Jan 2009 Device: Sony 505\| K Fire \| KK 3G+Wi-Fi \| iPhone 3Gs \|Vista 32-bit Hm Prem w/FF	Just a quick pop in to say that I LOVED the below sentence from your story.. "Where he should have been and where my kick should have connected were just two wishes that would never come true." Now, back to the story... Moejoe, I hope you didn't mind that I quoted a piece from your story.

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