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Old 09-11-2009, 04:45 PM   #241
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Saturday!

9PM EST!


Tune in for the second episode of Denial of Service!

This week, M.D. Schitz helps out another old friend of Gail's, whose programming biz is being hacked into.

"Since when do you listen to Abba?"

It seems Gail's friends are as insanely sexy as Gail.

"It was funky… but it put me through college." "I'm hip."

Maybe that's why Mike's protection slips up.

“What’s the matter!” “We have to get! You’re driving!” “Whu—” “Go!”

Will Mike be screwed?

"Wassup, Wonder Woman?"

Or were Freudian puns a bad idea in the first place?

"I plan to do more than nibble."

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Old 09-13-2009, 11:28 PM   #242
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My Dropbear story has foundered on the shoals of BoringCrud I think I can winch it off, but I'll need a CareFactor that's kinda... absent atm. I blame needing to work for a living

So, writing about a woman with multiple Significant Others, who attends a lot of 'business conventions' and the like. Thought it might be interesting to look at it from a viewpoint reversed from the standard 'man with 2 families' thing.

Meh. I'm feeling a bit over it all atm, to be honest.
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Old 09-23-2009, 04:54 PM   #243
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I feel a Denial of Service story coming on...
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Old 09-23-2009, 06:59 PM   #244
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W00t!

I think I'm getting Dropbear off the BoringCrud shoals. It's been a tough battle, but in a couple more instalments, it might actually get interesting.
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Old 09-28-2009, 01:42 PM   #245
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I think I nailed Denial of Service 3. I actually had to backtrack and do a rewrite, about halfway in... it was coming out waay too dark, and not even slightly funny. The rewrite is much more consistent with the theme, now. A bit of cleaning, a cover if I can manage it, and I'll have it up this week.
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Old 09-28-2009, 01:54 PM   #246
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W00t!

I think I'm getting Dropbear off the BoringCrud shoals. It's been a tough battle, but in a couple more instalments, it might actually get interesting.
How is that going?

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Old 09-30-2009, 10:45 AM   #247
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[I]Denial of Service 3: The Ukrainian Connection is online now.

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Old 09-30-2009, 01:41 PM   #248
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A story about a boy born on a Moon colony who longs to step foot on the Earth, but if he does it will kill him. It's very sad, and I'm not sure where it came from.

Edit: It's called "The First, the Last."
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Old 09-30-2009, 07:53 PM   #249
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Denial of Service 3: The Ukrainian Connection online now.

YAY! You might want to edit that link to take out the post information though, as it takes ppl to the last post of the story...

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Old 09-30-2009, 07:58 PM   #250
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I just finished the script for a graphic novel called The Terminals - the artist has started editing. Now I'm working on its novelization - weird to work from an 80 page outline! Feel organized for a change. (This will be my first adaptation, even if it's my own work.)
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A story about a boy born on a Moon colony who longs to step foot on the Earth, but if he does it will kill him. It's very sad, and I'm not sure where it came from.

Edit: It's called "The First, the Last."
Awwww....

Sounds good, if tissue-needy
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Old 09-30-2009, 07:59 PM   #252
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YAY! You might want to edit that link to take out the post information though, as it takes ppl to the last post of the story...
Fixed that for me! Thanks!
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Fixed that for me! Thanks!
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I just finished the script for a graphic novel called The Terminals - the artist has started editing. Now I'm working on its novelization - weird to work from an 80 page outline! Feel organized for a change. (This will be my first adaptation, even if it's my own work.)
Isn't there a saying that says...."There is a first time for everything."?

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Thanks, Dreams! Yah, I'm about 10K words into it now. It'll come.
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