Spiritual Twain, Mark: The War Prayer v2 15 August 2008

AlexBell · 08-15-2008, 07:40 AM

This is the second version, with headings centered with more space below, some hyphens changed to mdashes, and a typo fixed.

I'd appreciate more comments about its style and readability.

Regards, Alex

Attachment moved to the original thread here.

HarryT · 08-15-2008, 07:47 AM

Hi Alex,

Could I ask you please, to "follow the rules" and replace (or add) the new version in the first message of the original thread? Just go to the original message, click the "Edit" button, then "Advanced", then "Manage Attachments" to upload a new attachment or delete the original one.

If you start a separate thread for a new version we end up with multiple entries for it in our e-book index, which is undesirable.

Thanks very much,

AlexBell · 08-18-2008, 02:13 AM

Sorry, Harry. I had read the rules but forgot that part.

I'll try to do better in future.

Regards, Alex

HarryT · 08-18-2008, 03:10 AM

I was actually asking you to move the attachment of this thread, Alex

. Never mind - I've done it for you now.

08-15-2008, 07:40 AM	#1
AlexBell Wizard Posts: 3,413 Karma: 13369310 Join Date: May 2008 Location: Launceston, Tasmania Device: Sony PRS T3, Kobo Glo, Kindle Touch, iPad, Samsung SB 2 tablet	Twain, Mark: The War Prayer v2 15 August 2008 This is the second version, with headings centered with more space below, some hyphens changed to mdashes, and a typo fixed. I'd appreciate more comments about its style and readability. Regards, Alex Attachment moved to the original thread here.

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HarryT eBook Enthusiast Posts: 85,544 Karma: 93383043 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: UK Device: Kindle Oasis 2, iPad Pro 10.5", iPhone 6	Hi Alex, Could I ask you please, to "follow the rules" and replace (or add) the new version in the first message of the original thread? Just go to the original message, click the "Edit" button, then "Advanced", then "Manage Attachments" to upload a new attachment or delete the original one. If you start a separate thread for a new version we end up with multiple entries for it in our e-book index, which is undesirable. Thanks very much,

08-18-2008, 02:13 AM	#3
AlexBell Wizard Posts: 3,413 Karma: 13369310 Join Date: May 2008 Location: Launceston, Tasmania Device: Sony PRS T3, Kobo Glo, Kindle Touch, iPad, Samsung SB 2 tablet	Sorry, Harry. I had read the rules but forgot that part. I'll try to do better in future. Regards, Alex

08-18-2008, 03:10 AM	#4
HarryT eBook Enthusiast Posts: 85,544 Karma: 93383043 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: UK Device: Kindle Oasis 2, iPad Pro 10.5", iPhone 6	I was actually asking you to move the attachment of this thread, Alex . Never mind - I've done it for you now.

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