Having relationship troubles?

johanna sparrow · 01-18-2016, 09:23 AM

New book release from author Johanna Sparrow.

Sabotage http://www.amazon.com/Sabotage-Killi...ohanna+sparrow

This is the book for all those couples in need.
I don’t know how many times I have witnessed many of my friends and family members involved in happy, loving and committed relationships, sad and alone the next day. What could have happened? Who was to blame for the relationship not working out? What’s even more confusing is being introduced to someone new days later. I know you are thinking it’s none of my business why this is happening. Now don’t get me wrong, I understand sometimes things don’t work out for whatever reason, you just have to move on. For many of my family and friends this was happening on a regular basis. I wasn’t sure why this was happening to the people I loved around me, but I was going to find out. What I learned I tell you shocked the pants off of me, my friends and loved ones had “commitment phobia." To make it worse many of them did not believe in going to counseling and sharing their feelings with someone they did not know. I wanted to help them deal with their fears of rejection, commitment, trust issues and many other issues that caused them to pull away from love. Once more I wanted them to see that love was not death, but their way of thinking is what killed their relationships. My intentions are to teach you how to deal with your commitment phobe so you can win at love.

Cinisajoy · 01-18-2016, 11:26 AM

You need to fix your link.
Also fix the typo on the title page.
I do believe it should be I love you to death. Not I love you too death.

What qualifies you to write this book? Are you a counselor? How many relationships have you been in?

I am sorry but you are not describing a commitment phobe. There is a better word. A commitment phobe will run when commitment is mentioned.

Your book is reading like an outsider looking in through a very opaque window.
Sorry, sampled your book and I am not buying it.
Either the book or your thinking.

Dr. Drib · 01-18-2016, 12:00 PM

It appears as if 'Death' is used as a noun, and that the author loves two different individuals. The ambiguity does not build any confidence I may have in this ebook.

Additionally, on the cover there is this:

"I Love You Too, Death"

and right below that there is this:

"I Love You Too Death" - without the comma.

Too, after reading the phrase 'commitment phobe' eight (8) times in the second paragraph, I've come to the conclusion that this is a book that is not very well written - or perhaps was never edited, let alone proofread.

The non-working link is yet another clue....

Too bad.

Cinisajoy · 01-18-2016, 12:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dr. Drib

It appears as if 'Death' is used as a noun, and that the author loves two different individuals. The ambiguity does not build any confidence I may have in this ebook.

Additionally, on the cover there is this:

"I Love You Too, Death"

and right below that there is this:

"I Love You Too Death" - without the comma.

Too, after reading the phrase 'commitment phobe' eight (8) times in the second paragraph, I've come to the conclusion that this is a book that is not very well written - or perhaps was never edited, let alone proofread.

The non-working link is yet another clue....

Too bad.

Just 8. It seemed like more.
I read a little farther than you did and alas she is using that phrase wrong.

johanna sparrow · 01-18-2016, 12:49 PM

link now works

HarryT · 01-18-2016, 03:39 PM

You should demand your money back from your editor; they did a lousy job. You did have your book professionally edited?

Cinisajoy · 01-18-2016, 03:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HarryT

You should demand your money back from your editor; they did a lousy job. You did have your book professionally edited?

It looks like her editor only knows 2 words.

01-18-2016, 09:23 AM	#1
johanna sparrow Junior Member Posts: 2 Karma: 10 Join Date: Jan 2016 Device: none	Having relationship troubles? New book release from author Johanna Sparrow. Sabotage http://www.amazon.com/Sabotage-Killi...ohanna+sparrow This is the book for all those couples in need. I don’t know how many times I have witnessed many of my friends and family members involved in happy, loving and committed relationships, sad and alone the next day. What could have happened? Who was to blame for the relationship not working out? What’s even more confusing is being introduced to someone new days later. I know you are thinking it’s none of my business why this is happening. Now don’t get me wrong, I understand sometimes things don’t work out for whatever reason, you just have to move on. For many of my family and friends this was happening on a regular basis. I wasn’t sure why this was happening to the people I loved around me, but I was going to find out. What I learned I tell you shocked the pants off of me, my friends and loved ones had “commitment phobia." To make it worse many of them did not believe in going to counseling and sharing their feelings with someone they did not know. I wanted to help them deal with their fears of rejection, commitment, trust issues and many other issues that caused them to pull away from love. Once more I wanted them to see that love was not death, but their way of thinking is what killed their relationships. My intentions are to teach you how to deal with your commitment phobe so you can win at love. Last edited by johanna sparrow; 01-18-2016 at 12:49 PM.

01-18-2016, 11:26 AM	#2
Cinisajoy Just a Yellow Smiley. Posts: 19,161 Karma: 83862859 Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: Texas Device: K4, K5, fire, kobo, galaxy	You need to fix your link. Also fix the typo on the title page. I do believe it should be I love you to death. Not I love you too death. What qualifies you to write this book? Are you a counselor? How many relationships have you been in? I am sorry but you are not describing a commitment phobe. There is a better word. A commitment phobe will run when commitment is mentioned. Your book is reading like an outsider looking in through a very opaque window. Sorry, sampled your book and I am not buying it. Either the book or your thinking. Last edited by Cinisajoy; 01-18-2016 at 11:35 AM.

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01-18-2016, 12:00 PM	#3
Dr. Drib Grand Sorcerer Posts: 45,014 Karma: 55647515 Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Peru Device: Kindle: Oasis 3, Voyage WiFi; Kobo: Libra 2, Aura One	It appears as if 'Death' is used as a noun, and that the author loves two different individuals. The ambiguity does not build any confidence I may have in this ebook. Additionally, on the cover there is this: "I Love You Too, Death" and right below that there is this: "I Love You Too Death" - without the comma. Too, after reading the phrase 'commitment phobe' eight (8) times in the second paragraph, I've come to the conclusion that this is a book that is not very well written - or perhaps was never edited, let alone proofread. The non-working link is yet another clue.... Too bad.

01-18-2016, 12:49 PM	#5
johanna sparrow Junior Member Posts: 2 Karma: 10 Join Date: Jan 2016 Device: none	link now works

01-18-2016, 03:39 PM	#6
HarryT eBook Enthusiast Posts: 85,544 Karma: 93383043 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: UK Device: Kindle Oasis 2, iPad Pro 10.5", iPhone 6	You should demand your money back from your editor; they did a lousy job. You did have your book professionally edited?