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Continuation - A Short Story
Hi,
Just uploaded a new short story to Feedbooks, you'll find it here. It is some speculative science fiction and I am sure it still contains many errors (it's only my second piece ) But I hope you can look past my writing failures and enjoy the narrative it contains. Quote:
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09-21-2009, 03:40 PM | #2 |
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YAY! OK, now that I know you were writing, then I won't have to wonder where you have been lately. Gonna go get the book now.
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09-21-2009, 03:41 PM | #3 |
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Grabbed It's rocketed to the top of my reading list
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09-21-2009, 03:45 PM | #4 |
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Gotcha! thanks!!
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09-21-2009, 04:05 PM | #5 |
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You guys should go ahead and read it, only 8 pages of story. Pev, you did a good job! I really enjoyed it. The sci part of the fi was very believable. I could see this as a modern day "Twilight Zone" episode. Great story!
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09-21-2009, 04:09 PM | #6 |
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I loved your other story and just grabbed this one. Loading my Reader now.
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09-21-2009, 06:58 PM | #8 |
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I have just grabbed it.
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09-21-2009, 08:12 PM | #9 |
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Grabbed - will be reading soon!
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09-21-2009, 09:05 PM | #10 |
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I totally dug it, Peverel. I usually don't read SciFi [*collective gasp of horror from MR members*], but this was pretty cool.
****SPOILER ALERT**** My favorite part was the Pope taking on the "burden" of being God's final rep on earth. The ending just made me sad. |
09-22-2009, 12:35 AM | #11 |
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Peverel, I almost was late for work because I had to finish your story.. It was so believable (and yeah, the pope comment cracked me up).
I can't wait to read more of your stories. |
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