01-10-2014, 08:55 AM | #1 |
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suspended hyphen constructs
not a sigil question per se, but as this as a great place for expert typesetting type advice...
phrases like bell- book- andcandle which I just encountered in a retail book ( the sentence is: Well, I don’t want any of this bell-book-andcandle, incense-burning, medieval rubbish. ) or more generally, word1- word2 -andword3 crop up now & again & retail quality books. It looks wrong to me not to have a space between "and" & the final word, but is it actually valid & not sloppy proofreading ? It is an awkward question to google. & ideally is this a situation for using dash, endash, or emdash & with or without spaces ? more examples here: http://editingandwritingservices.com/suspended-hyphens/ |
01-10-2014, 09:29 AM | #2 |
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andcandle, andword are simply misspelled
I flunked High School English (all them odd rules made my head spin), but I think suspend in this usage indicates something repetitive is assumed Using your link: Pre-war and Post-war Two–wheel drive and four-wheel drive |
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01-10-2014, 09:47 AM | #3 |
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I've seen it "pre- and post-war."
I don't know about the "and" with no space between it and the next word. Can honestly say I've never encountered it. |
01-10-2014, 09:55 AM | #4 |
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IMHO, the first sentence is not an example of a suspended hyphen. The first phrase "bell, book and candle" is a Catholic term that that should be written as a compound with hyphens between each element, because it's used as an adjective:
bell-book-and-candle, incense-burning, medieval rubbish Last edited by Doitsu; 01-10-2014 at 04:07 PM. |
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more likely I suppose, it was wrong in the hardback/paperback & left that way, unless it was done for emphasis given the compound nature of the sentence ? there are 3 - what do you call them? - adjectival clauses, describing 3 types of "rubbish" & the bell book candle bit is one of 3 such. so maybe that is why the words need to be hyphen linked ? ( I know that the usual catholic phrase is: bell, book and candle , & the context here is that the speaker IS talking about exorcism- the book is the novel Midwinter Of The Spirit by Phil Rickman ) I think it reads better like the quoted poster says: Well, I don’t want any of this bell-book-and-candle, incense-burning, medieval rubbish. the e-book sentence is: Well, I don’t want any of this bell-book-andcandle, incense-burning, medieval rubbish. Last edited by cybmole; 01-10-2014 at 04:17 PM. |
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01-11-2014, 01:57 AM | #8 |
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publishers still use scanning ? - no wonder retail epub quality is so bad??? - I would have thought the'd have their originals in some computer format which they could run through e-book making software I think this novel was originally published circa 2000. new enough for authors to be using word processors ?
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