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Gregg, go back to the green cover.
Something just dawned on me. The hands look almost like a famous painting. Unless your book is inspirational, you could grab the wrong audience. |
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Baby can't wait, yellow-green
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But I don't know--is that necessarily bad? Are people going to go, "oh, this is a religious book--not for me." |
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What genre are you trying to reach? |
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If the childs hand gets scaled smaller, and thus moved further towards the bottom-left corner, it may move the notion away from Michelangelo?
I personally liked the girl looking at the doll. You can see something is wrong, but since she is facing the reader by looking ar the doll, I dont think rape, as she appears open. Something with the doll is just bothering her. |
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Personally I like the highbrow stuff but I don't think the average supsense reader will go for it. And you're making me re-think that cover with the girl looking at the doll. So many people were like, "That's perfect!" but then a bunch started coming in with 'it looks like she's been raped' or 'she lost a baby in stillbirth,' stuff like that. |
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Try making the title smaller, so it doesn't cover the eyes, and move your name up above the title. And it may be too strange, but rotate the subtitle ~25° and move it down, so it follows the wood in front of the childs mouth. Then it is also scewed in the same direction as the baby is, as if the statement is comming from the child.
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