User Poetry - Page 57

GeoffC · 10-22-2010, 11:00 AM

you could post with suitable use of ***

kennyc · 10-22-2010, 11:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by GeoffC

extremely well written poem that Kenny

Thank you, thank you, thank you.

a fun little jaunt....

kennyc · 10-22-2010, 12:33 PM

(minor re-write)

Ghost Cat

The ghost cat keeps coming back
every fortnight or so.

I see it shimmering in the entryway
or sometimes on the stairs

I don’t know what it wants
I offer food, water and mice

But nothing seems to soothe it
I think it’s come for me

Kenny A. Chaffin – 10/22/10

DaleDe · 10-22-2010, 12:44 PM

These are all great. A reminder that if you are willing to offer poems under CC license they can be added to the wiki. Then they can be found easier. There is already several pages of earlier works from this thread.

kennyc · 10-22-2010, 12:45 PM

Thanks Dale!

Joebill · 10-22-2010, 12:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kennyc

(minor re-write)

Ghost Cat

The ghost cat keeps coming back
every fortnight or so.

I see it shimmering in the entryway
or sometimes on the stairs

I don’t know what it wants
I offer food, water and mice

But nothing seems to soothe it
I think it’s come for me

Kenny A. Chaffin – 10/22/10

a nice Halloween touch there.

kennyc · 10-22-2010, 01:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Joebill

a nice Halloween touch there.

Thanks Joe, yeah, that's why it caught my eye in the "to be revised" pile.

kennyc · 10-22-2010, 03:57 PM

Random Thoughts on a Friday

I’m pondering my prostrate
and wondering how it’s doing
tested now and then
checking for big “C”
but even if no “C”
enlargement
can make it hard to pee.

Kenny A. Chaffin - 10/22/2010

GeoffC · 10-23-2010, 04:37 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kennyc

Random Thoughts on a Friday

I’m pondering my prostrate
and wondering how it’s doing
tested now and then
checking for big “C”
but even if no “C”
enlargement
can make it hard to pee.

Kenny A. Chaffin - 10/22/2010

kennyc · 10-23-2010, 05:50 AM

Thanks Geoff.

the muse is a bit silly today...

GeoffC · 10-23-2010, 06:11 AM

Is she not always ?

mind I seem to have a few more on the boil!

kennyc · 10-23-2010, 06:19 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by GeoffC

Is she not always ?

mind I seem to have a few more on the boil!

Ummmm, yeah.... looking forward to your next ones!

GeoffC · 10-23-2010, 06:20 AM

GeoffC · 10-23-2010, 06:31 AM

It's a candle, lit
for a life that will never fade;
by the memories singed
forever on your mind.
snaking flame aloft
tethered to the wax
smoke curls towards the heavens
and the angels' waiting arms.

kennyc · 10-23-2010, 06:39 AM

WOW! Excellent Geoff!

And fits with this quote I just ran across:

"Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash."
~Leonard Cohen~

10-23-2010, 06:39 AM	#855
kennyc The Dank Side of the Moon Posts: 35,907 Karma: 119230421 Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Denver, CO Device: Kindle2; Kindle Fire	WOW! Excellent Geoff! And fits with this quote I just ran across: "Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash." ~Leonard Cohen~ Last edited by kennyc; 10-23-2010 at 07:42 AM.

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10-22-2010, 11:00 AM	#841
GeoffC Chocolate Grasshopper ... Posts: 27,599 Karma: 20821184 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Scotland Device: Muse HD , Cybook Gen3 , Pocketbook 302 (Black) , Nexus 10: wife has PW	you could post with suitable use of ***

10-22-2010, 12:33 PM	#843
kennyc The Dank Side of the Moon Posts: 35,907 Karma: 119230421 Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Denver, CO Device: Kindle2; Kindle Fire	(minor re-write) *Ghost Cat* The ghost cat keeps coming back every fortnight or so. I see it shimmering in the entryway or sometimes on the stairs I don’t know what it wants I offer food, water and mice But nothing seems to soothe it I think it’s come for me Kenny A. Chaffin – 10/22/10

10-22-2010, 12:44 PM	#844
DaleDe Grand Sorcerer Posts: 11,470 Karma: 13095790 Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Grass Valley, CA Device: EB 1150, EZ Reader, Literati, iPad 2 & Air 2, iPhone 7	These are all great. A reminder that if you are willing to offer poems under CC license they can be added to the wiki. Then they can be found easier. There is already several pages of earlier works from this thread.

10-22-2010, 12:45 PM	#845
kennyc The Dank Side of the Moon Posts: 35,907 Karma: 119230421 Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Denver, CO Device: Kindle2; Kindle Fire	Thanks Dale!

10-22-2010, 03:57 PM	#848
kennyc The Dank Side of the Moon Posts: 35,907 Karma: 119230421 Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Denver, CO Device: Kindle2; Kindle Fire	*Random Thoughts on a Friday* I’m pondering my prostrate and wondering how it’s doing tested now and then checking for big “C” but even if no “C” enlargement can make it hard to pee. Kenny A. Chaffin - 10/22/2010

10-23-2010, 05:50 AM	#850
kennyc The Dank Side of the Moon Posts: 35,907 Karma: 119230421 Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Denver, CO Device: Kindle2; Kindle Fire	Thanks Geoff. the muse is a bit silly today...

10-23-2010, 06:11 AM	#851
GeoffC Chocolate Grasshopper ... Posts: 27,599 Karma: 20821184 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Scotland Device: Muse HD , Cybook Gen3 , Pocketbook 302 (Black) , Nexus 10: wife has PW	Is she not always ? mind I seem to have a few more on the boil!

10-23-2010, 06:20 AM	#853
GeoffC Chocolate Grasshopper ... Posts: 27,599 Karma: 20821184 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Scotland Device: Muse HD , Cybook Gen3 , Pocketbook 302 (Black) , Nexus 10: wife has PW

10-23-2010, 06:31 AM	#854
GeoffC Chocolate Grasshopper ... Posts: 27,599 Karma: 20821184 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Scotland Device: Muse HD , Cybook Gen3 , Pocketbook 302 (Black) , Nexus 10: wife has PW	It's a candle, lit for a life that will never fade; by the memories singed forever on your mind. snaking flame aloft tethered to the wax smoke curls towards the heavens and the angels' waiting arms.

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