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Old 08-24-2009, 02:44 AM   #61
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Old 08-24-2009, 07:12 AM   #62
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First story released into the wild @ http://www.feedbooks.com/userbook/7215

Blog post here: http://pauljohnlyon.wordpress.com/20...-1-nighthawks/

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This is a tad spooky Zee, so fair warning
thank you !! a tad spooky you say, okay, fair warning, i'll try to read it during the day. preferably in some crowded area with lots of people around. still looking forward to it !!
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Oh! Nice start that one MoeJoe, can't wait for the others
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Wowsers! That was really good!

I started reading pretty late and was getting chills!

I can't wait for more.
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Old 08-25-2009, 01:42 PM   #65
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thanks for this moejoe ! i read it last night and managed not to be scared, but i loved the unexpected ending. thinking about it, i think that's one of the things i most appreciate about your writing : you manage to surprise us and avoid falling into the same formulaic stuff we've already read.

i can't wait to read the rest of them !
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thanks for this moejoe ! i read it last night and managed not to be scared, but i loved the unexpected ending. thinking about it, i think that's one of the things i most appreciate about your writing : you manage to surprise us and avoid falling into the same formulaic stuff we've already read.

i can't wait to read the rest of them !
for reading And there should be a lot more stuff coming soon (in all kinds of genres) now that I've made a big decision, and also a big leap...but I'll leave that news for later on, around about Hallloween
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for reading And there should be a lot more stuff coming soon (in all kinds of genres) now that I've made a big decision, and also a big leap...but I'll leave that news for later on, around about Hallloween
what big decision ??? what big leap ???? you can't seriously expect us to survive TWO WHOLE MONTHS waiting for that news ??? tell us now !!!!!
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what big decision ??? what big leap ???? you can't seriously expect us to survive TWO WHOLE MONTHS waiting for that news ??? tell us now !!!!!
I'll just be devoting 'a lot more time to writing' by then, but you'll see I now have a domain, and there will be some stuff coming up, but there's still some design work and...well..I hate to be torturous, but I've still got to sort out some things
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I'll just be devoting 'a lot more time to writing' by then, but you'll see I now have a domain, and there will be some stuff coming up, but there's still some design work and...well..I hate to be torturous, but I've still got to sort out some things
you tease... this sounds like excellent news, whatever it is, so i hope you won't torture us too long. "devoting 'a lot more time to writing'" makes me very happy.
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I'll just be devoting 'a lot more time to writing' by then, but you'll see I now have a domain, and there will be some stuff coming up, but there's still some design work and...well..I hate to be torturous, but I've still got to sort out some things
Music to my ears...wait, I mean....words for my eyes!

You know what I mean.
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Just read Nighthawks, interesting & with a surprise!

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These tales are feeling very sombre in mood, I'm noticing. Maybe that reflects the paintings, or just my state of mind at the moment I think I need to write a thriller novel to get an even keel.

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