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Old 08-17-2009, 02:56 AM   #31
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Originally Posted by nomesque But there isn't anywhere near as much swearing in most of my stories. This one just happened to have potty-mouths as the main characters. I thought about trying to tone it down, but either it'd read weirdly (how many girlfriend-killing ex-cons say 'darn' and 'flip'?) or the asterisks would get distracting...
Oh, absolutely- if it's in the character, it's in the character.

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I do find it interesting that some people like the multi-first-person format, some hate it, and some are just... OK with it. It's not something I've really seen used much, but it just screamed to be used for this story.
People get weirdly picky over formats. I know one guy who simply cannot read first-person present-tense. I like a little experimentation, myself.

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Oh, of course. Always make sure that the priest you're contracting to excise your murdered girlfriend is legit.

Read Red Riding Hood just now. I approve of your apparent sudden flare for...

EDIT: Silly me, I ought to be wary of spoiling things for people. SPOILER BELOW!





...The eating of people.
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Old 08-17-2009, 04:14 AM   #34
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Originally Posted by nomesque But there isn't anywhere near as much swearing in most of my stories. This one just happened to have potty-mouths as the main characters. I thought about trying to tone it down, but either it'd read weirdly (how many girlfriend-killing ex-cons say 'darn' and 'flip'?) or the asterisks would get distracting...
Oh, absolutely- if it's in the character, it's in the character.

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I do find it interesting that some people like the multi-first-person format, some hate it, and some are just... OK with it. It's not something I've really seen used much, but it just screamed to be used for this story.
People get weirdly picky over formats. I know one guy who simply cannot read first-person present-tense. I like a little experimentation, myself.

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And of course the moral lesson
Oh, of course. Always make sure that the priest you're contracting to excise your murdered girlfriend is legit.

Read Red Riding Hood just now. I approve of your apparent sudden...

EDIT: Silly me, I ought to be wary of spoiling things for people. SPOILER BELOW!






... flare for cannibalism.
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Old 08-17-2009, 07:01 AM   #35
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Read Red Riding Hood just now. I approve of your apparent sudden flare for thingummy.
Thanks! LOL. What can I say, it's the vegetarianism... *snicker*
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Exactly. I'm glad that came across



Thanks! LOL. What can I say, as a vegetarian, I'm intrigued by the meat-chomping... *snicker*

i think you just gave away the ending and i read it - im not reading my notification emails ever again

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Old 08-17-2009, 08:02 AM   #37
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I downloaded this one a couple of days ago (after seeing it in your sig on a different thread).

I have added this to my current list of books to read so I should get round to it fairly soon.

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Old 08-17-2009, 09:50 AM   #38
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I have a short work up on FeedBooks atm - it's had almost zero editing though, so it's pretty rough - Red Riding Hood.
i love that the "similar downloads" for this story features "living history" by reyben and "dead pigeons" by moejoe sam luka.


(and yes, moejoe is definitely a brilliant man. )
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i love that the "similar downloads" for this story features "living history" by reyben and "dead pigeons" by moejoe sam luka.


(and yes, moejoe is definitely a brilliant man. )
Mobileread users download books from Mobileread authors, which is why the algorithm identify them as similar.
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i think you just gave away the ending and i read it - im not reading my notification emails ever again

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ill still grab the story and give it a read though
Crud... got carried away blathering on... very very sorry if it did. Not sure that it actually will be a spoiler for RRH, but sure woulda been for DEAD(ish).
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Downloaded and queued. My only question is, do I start this first or Small Victories
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Darn, that IS a dilemma! Maybe you can read them side by side...
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Darn, that IS a dilemma! Maybe you can read them side by side...
Well... I do have an iRex iLiad and an iRex DR1000 so it's possible. The problem is the screen size. I have way more text on the DR than on the iLiad so I'll have to change pages more on one. Also, I don't think they're the same length. Hmm....
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