User Poetry - Page 22

GeoffC · 06-04-2008, 02:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by slayda

Taylor 'egrets

that there are no cattle.

Good, that's one less thing to worry about...

badgoodDeb · 06-04-2008, 03:15 PM

'egrets ....
I've had a few.....
But then again
Too few to mention.

courtesy of ole blue eyes

montsnmags · 06-04-2008, 08:29 PM

SUPEREGO TO THE RESCUE!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Taylor514ce

One. Two... another!
In the green, swamped field
cattle egrets

('Course, being SuperEgo, I have restrained myself from quoting my own ego's delightful Only the Lonely cinquain)

Up, UP & AWAAAAAAAAY,
SuperEgo

montsnmags · 06-04-2008, 11:05 PM

(link)

...This is my gun...

rifling
my memory;
a look of lust dancing
across your gaze; your eyes on my
rifle

Cheers,
Marc

GeoffC · 06-05-2008, 10:43 AM

Meandering around,
hither and thither,
mozzying here and mozzying there
butterfly bees
pimping for fees...

slayda · 06-05-2008, 11:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by montsnmags

(link)

...This is my gun...

rifling
my memory;
a look of lust dancing
across your gaze; your eyes on my
rifle

Cheers,
Marc

Marine mnemonic;

This is my rifle.
This is my gun.
One is for shooting.
The other is for fun.

vivaldirules · 06-05-2008, 03:47 PM

Twasn't brillig. Twasn't brillig at all.
Not a slithy tove in sight.
Dark it was, and still is.
Stinking salivic twistings of fate
plunge slowly to the core
tearing out flesh along the way.
Sit up and be demised.
Death triumphs all.

badgoodDeb · 06-05-2008, 04:12 PM

Woah. In a bad mood today, are we? Would a tummy rub help? My Charley is always cheered by that .....

vivaldirules · 06-05-2008, 04:12 PM

Sorry for that. Not sure at all where that came from. Maybe I should go for a walk and get some air. Or else sit and dig out my eyeballs.

badgoodDeb · 06-05-2008, 05:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by vivaldirules

Twasn't brillig. Twasn't brillig at all.
Not a slithy tove in sight.
Dark it was, and still is.
Stinking salivic twistings of fate
plunge slowly to the core
tearing out flesh along the way.
Sit up and be demised.
Death triumphs all.

Well, I'd comfort you some more but I don't want your really emotion filled poem to scroll out of sight. Howz bout I skritch between your ears?

vivaldirules · 06-05-2008, 05:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by badgoodDeb

Well, I'd comfort you some more but I don't want your really emotion filled poem to scroll out of sight. Howz bout I skritch between your ears?

Thanks! That'll do the trick, I'm sure. Ooooooooo. That feels good. A little to the left, please.

montsnmags · 06-05-2008, 09:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by slayda

Marine mnemonic;

This is my rifle.
This is my gun.
One is for shooting.
The other is for fun.

Excellent. I'm glad someone noted my title. These things don't write themselves, you know!

Cheers,
Marc

GeoffC · 06-12-2008, 01:26 PM

eel meet again,
don't know
where
don't know,
when,
but I know
eel meet again
some sunny day...

badgoodDeb · 06-25-2008, 03:08 PM

Not anytime soon, apparently..... More poetry, please?

GeoffC · 06-26-2008, 01:22 PM

Society turned, on its head;
'tis said
Once; we were wed, before bed...
Now; we bed, before we wed.

06-05-2008, 04:12 PM	#323
badgoodDeb Grand Sorcerer Posts: 8,553 Karma: 64462893 Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Harrisburg outskirts Device: Palms, K1-4s, iPads, iPhones, KV, KO1	Woah. In a bad mood today, are we? Would a tummy rub help? My Charley is always cheered by that ..... Last edited by badgoodDeb; 06-05-2008 at 05:07 PM.

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06-04-2008, 03:15 PM	#317
badgoodDeb Grand Sorcerer Posts: 8,553 Karma: 64462893 Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Harrisburg outskirts Device: Palms, K1-4s, iPads, iPhones, KV, KO1	'egrets .... I've had a few..... But then again Too few to mention. courtesy of ole blue eyes

06-04-2008, 11:05 PM	#319
montsnmags Grand Sorcerer Posts: 10,155 Karma: 4632658 Join Date: Nov 2007 Device: none	(link) ...This is my gun... rifling my memory; a look of lust dancing across your gaze; your eyes on my rifle Cheers, Marc

06-05-2008, 10:43 AM	#320
GeoffC Chocolate Grasshopper ... Posts: 27,599 Karma: 20821184 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Scotland Device: Muse HD , Cybook Gen3 , Pocketbook 302 (Black) , Nexus 10: wife has PW	Meandering around, hither and thither, mozzying here and mozzying there butterfly bees pimping for fees...

06-05-2008, 03:47 PM	#322
vivaldirules When's Doughnut Day? Posts: 10,059 Karma: 13675475 Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Houston, TX, US Device: Sony PRS-505, iPad	Twasn't brillig. Twasn't brillig at all. Not a slithy tove in sight. Dark it was, and still is. Stinking salivic twistings of fate plunge slowly to the core tearing out flesh along the way. Sit up and be demised. Death triumphs all.

06-05-2008, 04:12 PM	#324
vivaldirules When's Doughnut Day? Posts: 10,059 Karma: 13675475 Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Houston, TX, US Device: Sony PRS-505, iPad	Sorry for that. Not sure at all where that came from. Maybe I should go for a walk and get some air. Or else sit and dig out my eyeballs.

06-12-2008, 01:26 PM	#328
GeoffC Chocolate Grasshopper ... Posts: 27,599 Karma: 20821184 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Scotland Device: Muse HD , Cybook Gen3 , Pocketbook 302 (Black) , Nexus 10: wife has PW	eel meet again, don't know where don't know, when, but I know eel meet again some sunny day...

06-25-2008, 03:08 PM	#329
badgoodDeb Grand Sorcerer Posts: 8,553 Karma: 64462893 Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Harrisburg outskirts Device: Palms, K1-4s, iPads, iPhones, KV, KO1	Not anytime soon, apparently..... More poetry, please?

06-26-2008, 01:22 PM	#330
GeoffC Chocolate Grasshopper ... Posts: 27,599 Karma: 20821184 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Scotland Device: Muse HD , Cybook Gen3 , Pocketbook 302 (Black) , Nexus 10: wife has PW	Society turned, on its head; 'tis said Once; we were wed, before bed... Now; we bed, before we wed.

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