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Old 04-09-2012, 04:32 PM   #16
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Violence in a romance? Hmm...does it add to the story? Does it make sense? Or is it just gratuitous (there simply for the sake of violence)? Or is it a necessary part of the plot? Again, that's something only you, the author, can decide.

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It leads into a shag in the toilets, so I would say it was necessary. So it's more a case of how detailed it is.
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Old 04-09-2012, 05:22 PM   #17
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It leads into a shag in the toilets, so I would say it was necessary.


Best. Justification. EVER.

As for level of detail, my personal take is "same as with your sex scenes". If they are vague, keep the violence vague. If they're gratuitous, go into detail about broken noses, bruises, and blood.
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