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Old 12-02-2011, 12:43 PM   #16
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Still needs to be made clearer what their motivation was though. And why did Jill tumble down too? Were they tied together?
A steep hill with wet grass can be very slippery indeed. I fell down on one myself a couple of months ago and badly sprained my knee. Hills can be dangerous!
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Old 12-02-2011, 12:54 PM   #17
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Still needs to be made clearer what their motivation was though. And why did Jill tumble down too? Were they tied together?
She jumped after him, Princess Bride style.
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Old 12-02-2011, 02:56 PM   #18
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She jumped after him, Princess Bride style.
Yes, that is how I read it.
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Old 12-02-2011, 04:24 PM   #19
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It's just as well you left out the line about going up a hill to fetch a bucket of water because any decent editor would point out that you don't find water at the top of a hill.
Well, actually, there are places where you do!
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Old 12-02-2011, 04:31 PM   #20
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Half a pound a treacle
Mix it up to make it nice
Pop! goes the weasel

Up and down the City Road
In and out the Eagle
That's the way the money goes
Pop! goes the weasel

Every time that I go out
The monkey gets on the table
Fetch a stick and knock him off
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Old 12-03-2011, 03:30 AM   #23
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Jack and Jill

Jack and Jill
went up the hill
to fetch a pail of water
Jack fell down
and broke his crown
and Jill came tumbling after



(There was a pond on top of the hill)
I know more of that one...

Up Jack got
And home did trot
As fast as he could caper
He went to bed
To mend his head
with vinegar and brown paper

Jill came in
And she did grin
To see Jack's paper plaster
Her mother whipped her 'cross her knees
For laughing at Jack's disaster
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A-sailing on the sea;
And, oh! it was all laden
With pretty things for thee!

There were comfits in the cabin,
And apples in the hold;
The sails were made of silk,
And the masts were made of gold.

The four-and-twenty sailors
That stood between the decks,
Were four-and-twenty white mice
With chains about their necks.

The captain was a duck,
With a packet on his back;
And when the ship began to move,
The captain said, "Quack! Quack!"
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