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You're welcome! Darn it, I'm almost sorry to hear book 2 is better. I don't dare start it now--got a show on Sunday that I have to prepare for--but now I know what I'll be doing Sunday night!
![]() I only noticed one error. In the calibre viewer, viewing the epub on page 203.8/475 in the line "sent here to determine if there was any was to protect against" |
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Between "too awful to read" and "perfect" there's pretty large set of books in the "I'll just get used to the typos" category. If only one or two things stand out, that's like a minor black spec on a clean white wall. Vincent, what did you mean when you said you thought 2 was better edited? ApK |
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![]() I also feel the sentence structure in book one is not as good as in book two, and one of my pre-readers pointed out that my "story telling" was much improved. He felt that book two showed of my talents much better then book one. All of my pre-readers of book two stated it was much better then book one. Besides.... I assume every author looks at a work and could tweak it forever... I know I do! |
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Well, I knew zip about the book before I started reading it except that it was a sci-fi/fantasy mix. The tone is more formal at the beginning of the book but given that it starts out as pretty straight-up military sci-fi I think it suits the storyline.
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Thanks all for the heads-up on the DRM thing.
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Well I been wanting to update the book to change it to reflect the release of volume II (since it listed as coming soon in current book) clean up some other title/copyright page stuff, and etc anyways... so I fixed this goof-up while I was there. So if you hope on Smashwords, you can get the fixed copy you helped create! |
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By the way...what the heck is the name of this book we're talking about?
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