Poet Challenge! New Poems Only!

griffonwing · 05-28-2009, 01:38 PM

OK, Instead of a thread where you post poems youve written in the past, this thread will be about challenge the poet in all of us, and creating new poems. This will help keep our minds sharp.

Here are the rules.

Someone posts a comment requesting a poem subject, as well as stating parameters that the poem must follow: For example, you can request a poem about a rabbit, freeverse, that must include the phrase "bouncy bouncy bouncy"

The poem must also be a new poem written solely for this thread, not a past work
The poem MUST adhere to those standards set by the requester.

I'll start off.

I request a poem about a bottle. Any kind of bottle.
Must be rhyme scheme ABABCC. Any meter.
No particular phase or word(s) used.

GeoffC · 05-28-2009, 05:08 PM

Cheek,
My last few are 'new'

DixieGal · 05-28-2009, 05:34 PM

Sexy, curvy, and sleek,
with a golden atomizer.
A scent, a touch, a peek,
a misty fantasizer.
Come into my bedroom,
whispers bottled French perfume.

griffonwing · 05-28-2009, 05:46 PM

*contacts priceline for cheap, fast airfair to AL*

DixieGal · 05-28-2009, 06:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by griffonwing

*contacts priceline for cheap, fast airfair to AL*

UH Oh! Mothers, hide your daughters!

griffonwing · 05-28-2009, 06:26 PM

I like your choices of wording. 3 colourful adverbs, mirrored by 3 nouns.
I like the images that it brings to mind. Very sultry, almost decadent.

I, myself, do not wear or have any cologne. I normally wear one of 2 essence oils. Either Dragon's Blood or Frankincense.

Love the poem!

DixieGal · 05-28-2009, 06:27 PM

Now show me yours! Where is your poem about a bottle?

griffonwing · 05-28-2009, 07:33 PM

I was the requestor, lil dixiegal. why don't you put up a request?

But I shall go ahead. Here goes.

I pop a cork of my dear bottled grog.
And feel it start to burn.
I swallow more, mouth gaping as a frog.
The sky begins to turn.
Too much rum can make you sick.
That what me mum has told me *hic*

GeoffC · 05-29-2009, 04:53 AM

I'll leave you two love-birds singing songs to one-another .....

griffonwing · 05-29-2009, 10:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by GeoffC

I'll leave you two love-birds singing songs to one-another .....

Awww, we gots ta have more then 2 people writing here. We must haves MORE!

Unless you were requesting a poem about 2 love birds....

DixieGal · 05-29-2009, 11:02 AM

I request a poem about earthquakes from Geoffc.

GeoffC · 05-29-2009, 11:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DixieGal

I request a poem about earthquakes from Geoffc.

another one ? - Okay , give me a while...

GeoffC · 05-29-2009, 11:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by griffonwing

Awww, we gots ta have more then 2 people writing here. We must haves MORE!

Unless you were requesting a poem about 2 love birds....

the bottle request is in the pipeline- never fear.....

griffonwing · 05-29-2009, 11:13 AM

OK, I'll give you an hour *evil grin*

DixieGal · 05-29-2009, 11:20 AM

I'll give you an hour
and an evil grin.
I'll give you my flower
in an afternoon's spin.
As we while away the hours
making love amongst the flowers.

I'll give you an hour
and an evil grin.
I'll give you the power
to start things again.
As we while away the hours
making love amongst the flowers.

Now someone do one about coffee, but it can not be the drink.

05-28-2009, 01:38 PM	#1
griffonwing Suave Swabby, Savvy? Posts: 1,602 Karma: 520350 Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Harrison, ARrrr, USA - southern Ozark mountains Device: Slate Blue PEZ (Astak Pocket Pro), CVSCX-9300 Quad-band watch phone	Poet Challenge! New Poems Only! OK, Instead of a thread where you post poems youve written in the past, this thread will be about challenge the poet in all of us, and creating new poems. This will help keep our minds sharp. Here are the rules. Someone posts a comment requesting a poem subject, as well as stating parameters that the poem must follow: For example, you can request a poem about a rabbit, freeverse, that must include the phrase "bouncy bouncy bouncy" The poem must also be a new poem written solely for this thread, not a past work The poem MUST adhere to those standards set by the requester. I'll start off. I request a poem about a bottle. Any kind of bottle. Must be rhyme scheme ABABCC. Any meter. No particular phase or word(s) used. Last edited by griffonwing; 05-28-2009 at 01:40 PM.

05-28-2009, 05:34 PM	#3
DixieGal Hi There! Posts: 7,473 Karma: 2930523 Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Ft Lauderdale Device: iPad	Sexy, curvy, and sleek, with a golden atomizer. A scent, a touch, a peek, a misty fantasizer. Come into my bedroom, whispers bottled French perfume. Last edited by DixieGal; 05-28-2009 at 06:24 PM. Reason: I thought of a whisper instead of a tease.

05-29-2009, 11:20 AM	#15
DixieGal Hi There! Posts: 7,473 Karma: 2930523 Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Ft Lauderdale Device: iPad	I'll give you an hour and an evil grin. I'll give you my flower in an afternoon's spin. As we while away the hours making love amongst the flowers. I'll give you an hour and an evil grin. I'll give you the power to start things again. As we while away the hours making love amongst the flowers. Now someone do one about coffee, but it can not be the drink. Last edited by DixieGal; 05-29-2009 at 11:23 AM.

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05-28-2009, 05:08 PM	#2
GeoffC Chocolate Grasshopper ... Posts: 27,599 Karma: 20821184 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Scotland Device: Muse HD , Cybook Gen3 , Pocketbook 302 (Black) , Nexus 10: wife has PW	Cheek, My last few are 'new'

05-28-2009, 05:46 PM	#4
griffonwing Suave Swabby, Savvy? Posts: 1,602 Karma: 520350 Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Harrison, ARrrr, USA - southern Ozark mountains Device: Slate Blue PEZ (Astak Pocket Pro), CVSCX-9300 Quad-band watch phone	contacts priceline for cheap, fast airfair to AL

05-28-2009, 06:26 PM	#6
griffonwing Suave Swabby, Savvy? Posts: 1,602 Karma: 520350 Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Harrison, ARrrr, USA - southern Ozark mountains Device: Slate Blue PEZ (Astak Pocket Pro), CVSCX-9300 Quad-band watch phone	I like your choices of wording. 3 colourful adverbs, mirrored by 3 nouns. I like the images that it brings to mind. Very sultry, almost decadent. I, myself, do not wear or have any cologne. I normally wear one of 2 essence oils. Either Dragon's Blood or Frankincense. Love the poem!

05-28-2009, 06:27 PM	#7
DixieGal Hi There! Posts: 7,473 Karma: 2930523 Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Ft Lauderdale Device: iPad	Now show me yours! Where is your poem about a bottle?

05-28-2009, 07:33 PM	#8
griffonwing Suave Swabby, Savvy? Posts: 1,602 Karma: 520350 Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Harrison, ARrrr, USA - southern Ozark mountains Device: Slate Blue PEZ (Astak Pocket Pro), CVSCX-9300 Quad-band watch phone	I was the requestor, lil dixiegal. why don't you put up a request? But I shall go ahead. Here goes. I pop a cork of my dear bottled grog. And feel it start to burn. I swallow more, mouth gaping as a frog. The sky begins to turn. Too much rum can make you sick. That what me mum has told me hic

05-29-2009, 04:53 AM	#9
GeoffC Chocolate Grasshopper ... Posts: 27,599 Karma: 20821184 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Scotland Device: Muse HD , Cybook Gen3 , Pocketbook 302 (Black) , Nexus 10: wife has PW	I'll leave you two love-birds singing songs to one-another .....

05-29-2009, 11:02 AM	#11
DixieGal Hi There! Posts: 7,473 Karma: 2930523 Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Ft Lauderdale Device: iPad	I request a poem about earthquakes from Geoffc.

05-29-2009, 11:13 AM	#14
griffonwing Suave Swabby, Savvy? Posts: 1,602 Karma: 520350 Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Harrison, ARrrr, USA - southern Ozark mountains Device: Slate Blue PEZ (Astak Pocket Pro), CVSCX-9300 Quad-band watch phone	OK, I'll give you an hour evil grin