Two FREE Kindle Books!! 31st March

danhawkins · 03-31-2016, 10:33 AM

Two of my books, Make the most of your time, not your job and Liberating your inner child will be available for FREE download all day on the 31st of March. Please leave any feedback, as it will help me greatly, Thanks!!!

Make the most of your time, not your job!

Do you feel like your time has become a burden in your life? Always spending the day working your bones to a brittle.Then when you do have time to spare, you just don't know what to do with it. This book solves this common dilemma, giving you a simple overview on how I escaped the bearings of work to open up a new passage of happiness. It's also gives you a complete tried and tested rundown of activities and techniques that are easily implementable to do within your spare time. Don't be a prisoner to time, release it and let it become your greatest asset!

UK
http://www.amazon.co.uk/gp/product/B01CRKAKZK
US
http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B01CRKAKZK

Liberating your Inner Child

No part of you contributes as much to your happiness and enjoyment in life. Your inner child is there to work with you on reforming the relationship of you which you may have neglected or rejected it from allowing it to come with you into adulthood. Our inner child is our creativity and vitality,which without it, we become discouraged from developing a sense of fun that permits us from making the most of life.

This guide will rekindle the relationship you once had with your inner child, it will assist you in getting back to the stage where fun and enjoyment was just the normal part of your everyday.Unfortunately, childhoods were not always filled with positive, good times. Liberating your inner child is also about creating an inner child which one may not have possessed due to physical, psychological or mental abuse.

The inner child is not just about fun, but more about being ourselves and expressing this in a positive and uplifting way so that our existence can be fulfilled and enjoyed they way we want it too.

UK
http://www.amazon.co.uk/gp/product/B01DL8S9L4
US
http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B01DL8S9L4

Cinisajoy · 03-31-2016, 11:46 AM

Dan if you are reading this, you might want to reread carefully your introduction in the book.
I found at least one dropped word. "It's entirely up too." The sentence makes no sense.
There are a couple more places that look like you dropped a sentence or two.
Oh and lastly, if your partner is at the breading point, she really needs a break.

I wouldn't be so picky if you weren't in the self-help category.

I must say thank you for giving credit to your sources.
Other tiny suggestion.
What color did you use for your ideas? It comes out a very light gray (grey) on an ereader. Very hard to see.
I am assuming you were trying to highlight the ideas.

Last comment I hope.
Under your Write a Book: the first sentence makes no sense.
So please proofread, fix the errors and republish as you do have some fantastic ideas.

danhawkins · 04-12-2016, 04:25 PM

Thank you for your critic and honest feedback Cinisajoy.

I have amended most of the mistakes which were pretty obvious when you mentioned it. (I hope)

Changed the colour and underlined the ideas. Was using headline 2 in word which was ironically suggested to me from a kindle author.

A valuable lesson learnt here, no matter how precise my proofreading is, it is worth always getting someone else to proofread the book also, whether be professional or friend. Two heads are better than one as they say.

As for the category, I am slightly lost as to where it could go, most of the categories within self help relate to the content of the book.

Thanks again!

Cinisajoy · 04-12-2016, 04:40 PM

You have good categories chosen.
As to advice from "kindle author", watch who you listen too.
Some are like crabs in a bucket. They want to keep you in that bucket with them.

Oh on those highlighted ideas: I have seen the same thing in big publishers books because they are focused on how the paper looks.

Little secret:
Even the big names use proofreaders. Indie, trad and hybrid.
For the very reason of your brain will fill in what isn't there.

danhawkins · 04-12-2016, 04:55 PM

All will be taken on board and utilised for my next kindle book.

Thanks.

Cinisajoy · 04-12-2016, 05:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by danhawkins

All will be taken on board and utilised for my next kindle book.

Thanks.

You are welcome.
I think your books have tremendous potential.
Just remember that second set of eyes.

danhawkins · 04-23-2016, 08:25 AM

Both free for today (23rd) only!!

03-31-2016, 10:33 AM	#1
danhawkins Junior Member Posts: 4 Karma: 10 Join Date: Mar 2016 Device: Kindle	Two FREE Kindle Books!! 31st March Two of my books, Make the most of your time, not your job and Liberating your inner child will be available for FREE download all day on the 31st of March. Please leave any feedback, as it will help me greatly, Thanks!!! *Make the most of your time, not your job!* Do you feel like your time has become a burden in your life? Always spending the day working your bones to a brittle.Then when you do have time to spare, you just don't know what to do with it. This book solves this common dilemma, giving you a simple overview on how I escaped the bearings of work to open up a new passage of happiness. It's also gives you a complete tried and tested rundown of activities and techniques that are easily implementable to do within your spare time. Don't be a prisoner to time, release it and let it become your greatest asset! UK http://www.amazon.co.uk/gp/product/B01CRKAKZK US http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B01CRKAKZK Liberating your Inner Child No part of you contributes as much to your happiness and enjoyment in life. Your inner child is there to work with you on reforming the relationship of you which you may have neglected or rejected it from allowing it to come with you into adulthood. Our inner child is our creativity and vitality,which without it, we become discouraged from developing a sense of fun that permits us from making the most of life. This guide will rekindle the relationship you once had with your inner child, it will assist you in getting back to the stage where fun and enjoyment was just the normal part of your everyday.Unfortunately, childhoods were not always filled with positive, good times. Liberating your inner child is also about creating an inner child which one may not have possessed due to physical, psychological or mental abuse. The inner child is not just about fun, but more about being ourselves and expressing this in a positive and uplifting way so that our existence can be fulfilled and enjoyed they way we want it too. UK http://www.amazon.co.uk/gp/product/B01DL8S9L4 US http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B01DL8S9L4

03-31-2016, 11:46 AM	#2
Cinisajoy Just a Yellow Smiley. Posts: 19,161 Karma: 83862859 Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: Texas Device: K4, K5, fire, kobo, galaxy	Dan if you are reading this, you might want to reread carefully your introduction in the book. I found at least one dropped word. "It's entirely up too." The sentence makes no sense. There are a couple more places that look like you dropped a sentence or two. Oh and lastly, if your partner is at the breading point, she really needs a break. I wouldn't be so picky if you weren't in the self-help category. I must say thank you for giving credit to your sources. Other tiny suggestion. What color did you use for your ideas? It comes out a very light gray (grey) on an ereader. Very hard to see. I am assuming you were trying to highlight the ideas. Last comment I hope. Under your Write a Book: the first sentence makes no sense. So please proofread, fix the errors and republish as you do have some fantastic ideas. Last edited by Cinisajoy; 03-31-2016 at 12:04 PM.

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04-12-2016, 04:25 PM	#3
danhawkins Junior Member Posts: 4 Karma: 10 Join Date: Mar 2016 Device: Kindle	Thank you for your critic and honest feedback Cinisajoy. I have amended most of the mistakes which were pretty obvious when you mentioned it. (I hope) Changed the colour and underlined the ideas. Was using headline 2 in word which was ironically suggested to me from a kindle author. A valuable lesson learnt here, no matter how precise my proofreading is, it is worth always getting someone else to proofread the book also, whether be professional or friend. Two heads are better than one as they say. As for the category, I am slightly lost as to where it could go, most of the categories within self help relate to the content of the book. Thanks again!

04-12-2016, 04:40 PM	#4
Cinisajoy Just a Yellow Smiley. Posts: 19,161 Karma: 83862859 Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: Texas Device: K4, K5, fire, kobo, galaxy	You have good categories chosen. As to advice from "kindle author", watch who you listen too. Some are like crabs in a bucket. They want to keep you in that bucket with them. Oh on those highlighted ideas: I have seen the same thing in big publishers books because they are focused on how the paper looks. Little secret: Even the big names use proofreaders. Indie, trad and hybrid. For the very reason of your brain will fill in what isn't there.

04-12-2016, 04:55 PM	#5
danhawkins Junior Member Posts: 4 Karma: 10 Join Date: Mar 2016 Device: Kindle	All will be taken on board and utilised for my next kindle book. Thanks.

04-23-2016, 08:25 AM	#7
danhawkins Junior Member Posts: 4 Karma: 10 Join Date: Mar 2016 Device: Kindle	Both free for today (23rd) only!!