Slave of twenty first century

senapatibibhuti7 · 01-22-2016, 03:30 AM

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HarryT · 01-22-2016, 05:51 AM

The standard of English in this book is abysmally poor - I counted four errors in the first 10 lines. Please have your book edited by a native English speaker; nobody is going to buy it the way it is now.

Dr. Drib · 01-22-2016, 07:07 AM

I'm sorry, but your book's synopsis is rife with errors: You have dropped words, run-on sentences. Other errors abound.

In my opinion, you should take your book off-line and have it professionally edited.

01-22-2016, 03:30 AM	#1
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01-22-2016, 05:51 AM	#2
HarryT eBook Enthusiast Posts: 85,560 Karma: 93980341 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: UK Device: Kindle Oasis 2, iPad Pro 10.5", iPhone 6	The standard of English in this book is abysmally poor - I counted four errors in the first 10 lines. Please have your book edited by a native English speaker; nobody is going to buy it the way it is now.

01-22-2016, 07:07 AM	#3
Dr. Drib Grand Sorcerer Posts: 45,628 Karma: 60184181 Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Peru Device: KINDLE: Oasis 3, Scribe (1st), Matcha; KOBO: Libra 2, Libra Colour	I'm sorry, but your book's synopsis is rife with errors: You have dropped words, run-on sentences. Other errors abound. In my opinion, you should take your book off-line and have it professionally edited.