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johnsmith10a10 · 03-26-2016, 01:09 AM

Hello, I just published this Kindle book called "Clean Eating Diet: 57 Delicious Recipes To Jump Start Your Weight Loss" [from] Amazon. [Text edited - MODERATOR.]
Do you think you could give it a look and help me out with a review if you think it deserves it? It'd be super helpful:
http://www.amazon.com/Clean-Eating-D...+by+john+smith

Dr. Drib · 03-26-2016, 08:19 AM

I'm sorry, but your grammar is sorely lacking. Someone needs to tell you this, rather than living your life in some kind of bubble thinking that everything is perfectly fine with your writing. Here's an example where you introduce yourself:

"I am John, John Smith. I like read book. I write this book because I want to say:"

One reviewer accused you of simply cutting and pasting. Is this true? Did you 'write' your book by cutting and pasting from the internet?

Cinisajoy · 03-26-2016, 06:06 PM

Well since today is the 26th and the book is NOT free, I will sample it and give you my opinion here.
At the Doctor, I will look and let you know if I think it is a C&P job.

Hey OP,
Food science has been around at least 4 decades.
I agree completely with Dr. Drib on your grammar. It looks like you trusted Google translate.
What does charity have to do with dieting?
Yes, Dr. Drib, the advice is copy and paste.
The giveaway is the grammar.

Dr. Drib · 03-27-2016, 12:10 AM

Because it is NOT free, I have now edited the Subject Heading and the body of his text.

Don
(Moderator)

03-26-2016, 01:09 AM	#1
johnsmith10a10 Junior Member Posts: 1 Karma: 10 Join Date: Jan 2016 Device: none	coookbook Hello, I just published this Kindle book called "Clean Eating Diet: 57 Delicious Recipes To Jump Start Your Weight Loss" [from] Amazon. [Text edited - MODERATOR.] Do you think you could give it a look and help me out with a review if you think it deserves it? It'd be super helpful: http://www.amazon.com/Clean-Eating-D...+by+john+smith Last edited by Dr. Drib; 03-27-2016 at 12:11 AM.

03-26-2016, 08:19 AM	#2
Dr. Drib Grand Sorcerer Posts: 45,437 Karma: 59592133 Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Peru Device: KINDLE: Oasis 3, Scribe (1st), Matcha; KOBO: Libra 2, Libra Colour	I'm sorry, but your grammar is sorely lacking. Someone needs to tell you this, rather than living your life in some kind of bubble thinking that everything is perfectly fine with your writing. Here's an example where you introduce yourself: "I am John, John Smith. I like read book. I write this book because I want to say:" One reviewer accused you of simply cutting and pasting. Is this true? Did you 'write' your book by cutting and pasting from the internet? Last edited by Dr. Drib; 03-27-2016 at 08:00 AM.

03-26-2016, 06:06 PM	#3
Cinisajoy Just a Yellow Smiley. Posts: 19,161 Karma: 83862859 Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: Texas Device: K4, K5, fire, kobo, galaxy	Well since today is the 26th and the book is NOT free, I will sample it and give you my opinion here. At the Doctor, I will look and let you know if I think it is a C&P job. Hey OP, Food science has been around at least 4 decades. I agree completely with Dr. Drib on your grammar. It looks like you trusted Google translate. What does charity have to do with dieting? Yes, Dr. Drib, the advice is copy and paste. The giveaway is the grammar. Last edited by Cinisajoy; 03-26-2016 at 06:15 PM.

03-27-2016, 12:10 AM	#4
Dr. Drib Grand Sorcerer Posts: 45,437 Karma: 59592133 Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Peru Device: KINDLE: Oasis 3, Scribe (1st), Matcha; KOBO: Libra 2, Libra Colour	Because it is NOT free, I have now edited the Subject Heading and the body of his text. Don (Moderator)