Feedback on writing..Marathon of Fear

jhempel24 · 05-21-2013, 12:40 PM

So I'm going to just post it. The story will change based on feedback, and then the ENTIRE thing will change once it's complete based on all the feedback I've gotten.

I'm not really an author, I just want to get to writing fiction, and I figure this is the best way.

I'm NOT trying to advertise my blog....I'm looking for feedback, please don't delete. It's just the easiest way to get it out there to the masses for all sorts of feedback!

It's a slow start, but it's an extreme horror story called Marathon of Fear
http://topoftheheapreviews.com/marat...l-chapter-one/

05-21-2013, 12:40 PM	#1
jhempel24 Wizard Posts: 2,157 Karma: 7068605 Join Date: Dec 2007 Device: Amazon Kindle Paperwhite, B&N Nook Colro	Feedback on writing..Marathon of Fear So I'm going to just post it. The story will change based on feedback, and then the ENTIRE thing will change once it's complete based on all the feedback I've gotten. I'm not really an author, I just want to get to writing fiction, and I figure this is the best way. I'm NOT trying to advertise my blog....I'm looking for feedback, please don't delete. It's just the easiest way to get it out there to the masses for all sorts of feedback! It's a slow start, but it's an extreme horror story called Marathon of Fear http://topoftheheapreviews.com/marat...l-chapter-one/

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