Need feed back from anyone on my first ebook

[thetwig350]

http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00BLNNUNY



Check it out and let me know what you think. Every bit of feed back helps me out and hopefully my book will help you out in return! Thank you!

[Elfwreck]

$3 for a 19-page book with no cover and no sample. Blurb includes 2nd person POV, a sentence ending with a preposition, and a dangling participle. Title includes a question mark for something that's not a question.

How to Maintain a Healthy Diet? A step by step guideline for an average person
This book is a great way to improve your diet in some ways in which you have never thought of. Along with learning on improving your diet, facts on why it is a healthier alternative are included in the book. Great deal. Great book.

Serious advice: Hire an editor. Start with a friend who's good with grammar and punctuation if you can't afford full professional treatment. If you don't have a friend who can and will edit your manuscript, take some composition classes--there are free ones online--before trying to charge people money to read your writing.

I don't care how revolutionary your diet ideas are (and why should I believe they're even interesting, with a title and intro like that?); if you can't structure a coherent paragraph, I'm not going to read what you have to say.

[Bilbo1967]

Did you actually write the book? Your post reads like you speak English, the blurb for the book seems to be written by somebody who doesn't.