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Does this make sense?
I'm busy reading a novel and a certain excerpt doesn't feel finished to me. I'm not sure if I'm misunderstanding something or if it's a problem with the text.
Some context. Some kids are walking through some zombie infested areas. Ash and Saint are people. Rotter refers to a zombie. Quote:
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It makes reasonable sense to me, at least the class of sense that applies to a zombie story. That is, assuming the chains that Saint "lash(ed) out with" were substantial enough to act as a weapon. It wouldn't follow that Ash would need to wipe off his knife since he seems to have left the serious work to Saint and her chains.
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