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What do you think of this one?
It's for general fiction. Thanks.
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This doesn't look deadly at all, to me.
It just looks like someone sleeping on a bed and wearing a black T-shirt with blue designs. |
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My first reaction was: horror genre, looks too spooky for me. Doesn't look like general fiction at all.
Is it horror? The title also gives that impression. |
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Once again you don't want my opinion.
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The author name should be where the title is and the title should be where the author name is. As for the girl, she looks like she's sleeping peacefully. She should look like she's having a nightmare.
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I think some someone's holding the book upside-down.
![]() And like the others above, I can't say that this looks like general fiction to me. It's not quite horror ... maybe murder mystery. The cover combined with the title exacerbates this impression. |
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Here's a TYPE of image you might wish to think about using, although this one goes into (perhaps) general horror.
Hint: Turn it upside down. Go here for more information: http://www.dailymail.co.uk/femail/ar...right-way.html Generally, I think using the face of an actual person on a cover should be avoided - for all the obvious reasons. Last edited by Dr. Drib; 10-28-2017 at 05:26 PM. Reason: 'mage' to 'image' |
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Thanks Dr. I just thought the overall darkness and her being upside-down, along with the title, negated the just looking like a person sleeping.
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Thanks BookCat. Yeah, it's a pretty scary story but not quite horror. I really didln't know what to call it genre-wise.
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Thanks Jon. Yeah I thought of flipping the title and my name but I thought with her image being upside down maybe I'd be doing something unconventional with the title and the name being flipped.
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