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Originally Posted by mr ploppy
To be honest it's only on there at all because Smashwords insists on it. Can I get some opinions on a beta-blurb as well? I know this doesn't suggest romance either, but it's a fairly accurate description of what it is about.
They wanted a romantic weekend by the sea …
They weren’t looking for a fight …
But you have to defend yourself …
Right?
A ska festival draws thousands of skinheads from across the country to the sleepy seaside town of Cleethorpes. Local residents and day-trippers look on in horror as the town is taken over by shaven-headed masses wearing boots and braces. But much to their surprise, the weekend unfolds peacefully.
That is, until a group of drunken bikers think it would be a good laugh to smash up a few scooters, thinking they must belong to mods. Revenge is swift and vicious, but the bikers have friends too. Friends who are more than eager to settle the score.
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I am not really a writer and certainly not a author, though I am trying with a memoir still I can relate to this kind of stuff.
My version would be:
They wanted a romantic weekend by the sea …
They weren’t looking for a fight …
... but Shit Happens!