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Feedback...
Hello, All.
@TrineDaely Hour of the Stranger
I've got to be honest with you, I read the first line of this poem and you had me -- hook, line and sinker!
What absolutely GORGEOUS word imagery you've used. The words drip from my ears and make a sweet taste in my mouth. OOOOoooooo!! I got goosebumples reading your piece.l Absolutely excellent and a wonderful poem!
@GeoffC Turbines Without Power
Hmmm... Your piece certainly gets across its point but it was a rough read for me. I found it to be a bit disjointed, although; I did enjoy the layout and repeatative pattern of the first four stanzas.
A very interesting premise, I must say...
Regards,
Vandy
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